DA,
This is a nice complete composition. Movement transitions everything. Mellow indeed. quite impressive. This is the best thing i remember hearing from you. Not that your other stuff has been great i just really dig this! Great job.
i did find myself wanting just one thing
your hi hat was going ts ts ts ts....
I would have liked once in a while if there was a double time hi hat in the middle of some of those bars (not for the whole bar(sparse))..but thats just me