Hi. I did a tune which imo has a simplistic chorus. I hope you like

https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/disco-kat

This is a good tune with a good flow.  Your bass line is really good.  Somehow I think that in places the "organ" seems a bit muddy.  Wait for other critiques before taking that too seriously because my ears are not what they used to be.  Being a bass player, the bass track really seems nice to me.  Good track, buddy!

evadianepug
This is a good tune with a good flow.  Your bass line is really good.  Somehow I think that in places the "organ" seems a bit muddy.  Wait for other critiques before taking that too seriously because my ears are not what they used to be.  Being a bass player, the bass track really seems nice to me.  Good track, buddy!

Thank you Warren. I try to make a bit more complex bass lines especially if the backing is otherwise boring so I am glad you liked the bass bits. Mixing is one of those things I am not good at so you are probably right about the keyboard sound

Nice  groove and melody lines. Cheerful ambiance with pleasant soundscape.

Nice enough tune, I do wonder sometimes if your mixes are somewhat a little dense, it might help if you tried to lighten the instrumentation in some places.  That I think is the muddiness that Warren is hearing, TIOCJMPFO.

Thanks for sharing.

Doesn't sound like disco to me.

Makke
Nice  groove and melody lines. Cheerful ambiance with pleasant soundscape.

Thank you for listening Makke

Wookiee
Nice enough tune, I do wonder sometimes if your mixes are somewhat a little dense, it might help if you tried to lighten the instrumentation in some places.  That I think is the muddiness that Warren is hearing, TIOCJMPFO.

Thanks for sharing.

You might well be right Wookiee because I have often a tendency to try to make the tune sound full of sounds. I may change this habit

Soundwise
Doesn't sound like disco to me.

I know. I just come up with bad song names. I have also often difficulties correctly identifying my tune's correct style. Thanks for listening

Disco-smishco -- it sounds good to me -- always like your creations.
Good luck,
Allan