Hey Steve, this sounded great! The vocals are Awesome. I loved the lyrics too. They're very relatable. If I could change one thing though, I feel like the song is always on the edge of a breakout into a full beat. I was waiting for the drums to kick in, but they never did. I really enjoyed it though. Great job!

Thanks Bob, my son in law said more or less the same when he listened to it in the studio. Thing is, I guess the old creative juice went dry after it was written some years ago, it was just after my old man passed and it got rid of some anger so I just left it as a message.
 
Thanks for your ear means a lot
Best regards
Steve