Cool tune! I'd just lower the piano a little when the vocal is present, and maybe a little more reverb on the piano.
 
Don't care about a translation - I think the cadence fits very nicely and you have a nice voice!
 
I think your acoustic guitar's tuning is not exactly matching the piano, hope you can check on that. It's a nice part of the song.
 
cheers,
-Tom

emeraldsoul
Cool tune! I'd just lower the piano a little when the vocal is present, and maybe a little more reverb on the piano.
 
Don't care about a translation - I think the cadence fits very nicely and you have a nice voice!
 
I think your acoustic guitar's tuning is not exactly matching the piano, hope you can check on that. It's a nice part of the song.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Hello Tom,
Thanks a lot for listening,
Ok people have good ears here :-)
Yes guitar is tuned with a cool tool named Peterson's Strobosoft which gives what they label " sweetener" ,a way to put some strings slightly off tune,which normally works ,but not against the " icy " tuning of a " fake" piano....
I will have a look to remake the guitar part,but I do not know when.
Thanks again.
Cheers.
Olivier.

Nice understated arrangement and clear production. Love your deep vocals.

pauldevillo
Nice understated arrangement and clear production. Love your deep vocals.

Hello Paul,thanks a lot for listening.
Sometime musicians say when I sing tunes with my guitar that the arrangement is inside the way I play the song, I don't know why,maybe it is the way I hear it.
Cheers.
Olivier.