OK, this is weird, not the song, I just finished litening to Nettlesmith Satan's Kitchen, and then this.
 
I like the way you always stretch yourself, you push yourself.
 
The cymbal work is very nice.  Then lyrics truthful, and the arrangement very enlightening.
 
I need to listen to this again.
 
JQS

second listen,
 
love that thing at 1:18.  this is a heavy number.  the backing vocals are cool.  very dense mix, must have been hard to pull it together.
 
crazy man, crazy
 
JQS

So my favorite 7-11 clerk always says goodbye with *don't let the crazies get you* . Is the polite response *they're everywhere* or *we're everywhere*.

Cool lyrics and an unusual arrangement. Yeah. I like the tune and the concept. Seems others have already given you some suggestions that can help you get your track buffed up. Give them a shot and lets see. 

Mark, thanks for your response.  I'm starting to like the song, myself.  To be compared to TH is quite a compliment.
 
Jesse, I appreciate you taking the time to listen twice!  The mix has thus far eluded me, but I'm encouraged by the suggestions I've received here.
 
David, I like the second response.
 
Dean, thanks for your time and reply.  I will be tackling this mix again, hopefully, this weekend.  Stay tuned.

Thanks to all who have given me suggestions for improving this mix.  I remixed it today and lowered the compression to give it more breathing room and make it less fatiguing.  Hopefully, I covered all the ideas you've made, but if I missed any, please let me know.  The link is in the OP and here:https://www.soundclick.co...ngid=13676989&q=hi

Lynn, I love this. The lyrics are just fantastic and the song is nice and gutsy - lots of good emotion.This is a very cool tune my friend.

I like the groove on this song. Somewhere in the middle I was getting hints of the Police.

Hey Lynn - this ain't nothing but cool.  I love the lyrics and your vocals deliver the the lyrics very well (emotion and timing).  I also like that bass track.  I always enjoy your posts and tunes.

Mark, thanks for your kind words and taking the time.
 
Glenn, that's quite a compliment.  I have listened to the Police many, many times over the years; maybe something rubbed off.
 
Freddy, thank you once again.  My friend will be happy to hear your words.  I'm always happy to hear from you.