Hi Steve,
Thank you for answering.
I followed somewhat your insights and mooved away the stick at the start.

Well ,
Almost reached something with this song..
Just have to redo all the vocals....
CU soon.
Olivier.
Edit.
Well I think there comes a time to admit that things are as they are.
It recalls me a tv broadcast I watched once where Britney Spears absolutely wanted to have another take on a song and the producer said ... No!
Not pretending I should approach this lady's talent but while the vocals on this song are out of tune and out of beat,there is no need to try to make it better.... It won't....Tempo is too slow,drum part doesn't hold the line,they are tons of mistakes concerning bass and guitars part..... This can be an endless work,for nothing......
Thanks to all of you who gave kind advices and thanks to the others too.
I like this place , hope it will carry on with its nice " soul " .
See you soon.
All the best.
Olivier.

Hi Oliver.  This song really has a nice laid-back country-ish feel to it. The lyrics have a good story line and I very much like the timber of your voice.
 
Nice one

Freddy J
Hi Oliver.  This song really has a nice laid-back country-ish feel to it. The lyrics have a good story line and I very much like the timber of your voice.
 
Nice one

Hi Fred,
Thanks a lot for listening,and for your words.
All the best.
Olivier.

Hi,
Well sorry to be loud with this tune,but I have passed the state of being ashamed.....
Good news with Sonar rebirth,this is the strength of virtual world,some of us are aware that in real life no brand ,as powerful as it is ,can make the needles run backward...
Just to say that with the help of a kind of realtime autotune Waves plug-in ( on sales last week) ,I have almost the feeling to sing...well, in tune....
Next step will be the audioquantize in realtime plug-in ,and then ,I will be in tune and on time...
Kind of cheating,almost a fake singer,..
Anyway,to my ears,though I think I am not able to have any objectivity concerning this song,it seems to help.
Again good news with Sonar.
All the best.
Olivier

this is great Olivier - tres bien

I like it Oliver.
 
One word bothered me. Weighting maybe should have been weighing? That's the only negative crit I have.

daryl1968
this is great Olivier - tres bien

Hi Daryl,
Thanks a lot for listening.
Olivier.

BJZ
I like it Oliver.
 
One word bothered me. Weighting maybe should have been weighing? That's the only negative crit I have.

Hi BJZ.
Thanks for listening and for putting me back in the right way.
I get in touch with my limits... Got to go back writing in french,or get the help of somebody proficient in english in the future ....
It is easy to correct this mistake in the written text,but as far as I do not want to redo the vocal on this one ,I will give a try with RX when I'll be back in the " studio" and see if it can help....
If it works,then it will be complete cheating in some way...( pitch correction AND audio correction).
Thanks again.
All the best.
Olivier.

Not my thing really, but it sounds well here, nice mix and I enjoyed it too, thanks for sharing.