Lord Tim has the right idea and it is all about the arrangement first and foremost and I mean what are the parts actually saying. I bet too may parts are overlapping each other instead of weaving in and out of each other.
EQ and compression and stuff are all poor relations to actually sorting out the arrangement. What a great producer does is cut the music around a lot. I bet I could cut the parts up in such a way that the same phrases and intentions are applied but instead hardly anything is overlapping or playing at the same time.
You can be too precious about what you have played. If you handed this section over to a top producer the first thing they would be doing is removing unwanted overlapping stuff. You need to create the air and see what I have called the black backdrop behind the music. If you cannot see the black backdrop or it becomes a grey wash type of backdrop you have simply got too much going on.
When you get this stuff right you can actually have solid EQ and much more fuller sounding parts that have much more weight and body to them. Hacking out stuff EQ wise to make things audible is a poor way to do it. You end up with thin sounding parts.