Very good:) It was well orchestrated and I liked the melodies

Steen - I like this!  really nice work.  agree with others the concept is huge!
 
I would like to have heard a little more compression overall on the track, the dynamics were a little too much of a jump, just in my opinion.  I'm not a fan of overly compressed "brick" songs, but  I think this one could use a little more than you have.
 
nice guitar at 6:31!
 
good stuff!

Definitely getting an Oldfield vibe from this, very nice work so far. Good luck with the whole project!

cwestmont
Hi Steen, I like the tune.  Letting it unfold naturally is a key strength.  Sounds like an ambitious project you are undertaking!

Thanks a lot for your input.
 

stevec
Ditto to the above - sounds like a cool concept!
 
I liked the piece, I think one of the better ones I've heard from you.  For me, anyway.   It has a nice slightly dreamy vibe, the mix is clear, and the lead tones + melody gives it that medieval thing.    That short break section in the middle was neat and I liked how it led to the piano section.

Thanks for your comments Steve. It really means a lot in the motivation department.
 

kakku
Very good:) It was well orchestrated and I liked the melodies

Thank a lot for listening.
 

jamesg1213
Definitely getting an Oldfield vibe from this, very nice work so far. Good luck with the whole project!

Good to hear. Thanks for your input.

I am just catching up listening to songs on this forum and I have been looking forward to hearing this. I think you are on to something!
 
The changes of mood and pace come at the right times, maybe a bit more energy in the percussion in some sections would help.

my brother
 
I love the concept, the ambition, and the effort
go get it
I can't wait to hear the whole piece in it's entirety.
 
this particular piece is what I would cal highlands music
 
Do you plan to add vocals, I am hearing vocals in my mind, vocals too flesh some of the parts out
 
the bass is right there
 
yes, you are on to something here, keep your wits, and get back soon with the next installment.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 
 
 

You are one talented guy - this is really good.

Glyn Barnes
I am just catching up listening to songs on this forum and I have been looking forward to hearing this. I think you are on to something!
 
The changes of mood and pace come at the right times, maybe a bit more energy in the percussion in some sections would help.

Thanks for listening. I hear you on the percussion. I'm gion to do the full structure first and then fine tune at the end.
 

Jesse Screed
my brother
 
I love the concept, the ambition, and the effort
go get it
I can't wait to hear the whole piece in it's entirety.
 
this particular piece is what I would cal highlands music
 
Do you plan to add vocals, I am hearing vocals in my mind, vocals too flesh some of the parts out
 
the bass is right there
 
yes, you are on to something here, keep your wits, and get back soon with the next installment.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 

Do you mean vocals with lyrics ? If so then no, but I should have some choir here and there. Thanks for your input

MarkusClinus
You are one talented guy - this is really good.

Thanks, but I'm not sure. I've listening to old albums and found something that was a little to close to mine. Been a bit bummed out about that for a while. Maybe I'm just good at copying ?

In the style of Mike Oldfield, builds as it tells a story.  Thanks for sharing.

Full speed ahead with this project! Great idea and based on this it will be pretty epic. You clearly have a musical ideas factory in your brain - awesome! Mix-wise, I'd vote for the percussion to be just a little lower in volume, or perhaps switch up the tone occasionally, as that one bass note (that sounds like a kick drum to me) gets kind of samey. Not sure what you can do there, but I look forward to hearing more.
 
cheers,
-Tom