Just had a listen...  sounds great, Dave!   It does have that late 60's sparkly/jangly thing happening, but I think it works for this song.   Everything sits nicely together giving it a good "live" feel even though it's not.  Loved the reverb on the synth lead, and that organ is phat...

Cool! Excellent version.
Well done cover. Good vocs and backing.
 

Always loved this song! Love your version! Well done

I like this a lot, great cover version, and the mix worked for me, too. Very nice. 

Don't know the song, but this sounds fine to me.

pentimentosound https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SqxQw9XWkd0
 The original on YouTube

Account removed because of multiple copyright infringements.

I guess John wasn't the only one who didn't want that song out in the world. I couldn't find any YouTube videos of the original recording. I did find this Phish cover, though...

 
BTW, thanks for all the nice comments, guys.

Bit, 
 
Don't recall ever hearing the original Beatles' song but your cover is really good.    Vocals are terrific.
 
Regards

Love the vocals

Excellent performances, mix, and arrangement. I still love the (very sparse) original from the White Album, but your new arrangement really takes the song in a new direction, and I love it!
 
I've been using a lot of the NI Scarbee Rickenbacker (or sometimes the Scarbee MM-Bass) bass for Kontakt here, but Trillian sounds really solid. I may have to look into that some more when I have a few bucks to spend.
 
Your performances on bass and sax were really fluid and fearlessly played. May I ask what sort of input device you use? I see you have a Yamaha MO8 (I have a Yamaha Motif ES8, which I believe is quite similar). But I'm guessing the piano-weighted keys would make it quite difficult to perform those parts. Do you have some other midi keyboard you use for synths and such?
 
Great stuff.