Thanks for providing a soundclick option, I for one am leery of Dropbox.
I liked the mayhem in your song! More fearless release. I would have pushed the vocals up a little in the mix.
As you listen to your awesome energetic vocals, you might hear the end of a word that trails off, a final consonant that isn't as loud, some soft plural whose volume dips below the average for the vocal. You might edit those up in volume with some automation. I couldn't make out all the words but I really wanted to.
I'm not suggesting "clarity" at the expense of "emotional vibe" because both are great, but in this song you might have more of the latter. Still cool as the tone says a lot.
I wish I could sing as freely.
Cheers,
-Tom