batsbrew
hey, i dig this one!
i like how you change up each of the intro sections..
each one has it's own version of the main riff..
bass sounds really good in the mix.
reminds me a little bit of something wayne krantz would do.
you could put a lyric on top of the main verse theme,
and call this a jazzy rock song.
lyric content?
how about..... getting lost in the mall parking lot.
Hi batsbrew ,
I'm certainly open to your suggestions .
I'm happy you gave my tune a listen and then came here to offer them
What's currently posted is the state of a musical Plateau I have gotten to so far in the songs development .
I like the way you sing man , I wish I could sing half as good as you
When they were passing out vocal chords I was at the back of the line trying to get more guitar picks & strings
Tell you what , if you want to do something on this tune have a go at it ...
The tune is 86 BPM . Even the silence breaks line up to tempo .
bjornpdx
Nice one Kenny. Sometimes it's hard to comment on a genre you don't listen to much, so I pay more attention to the skill of the musician. And you've got the skill for sure. As a side note, just wanted to say that I like the positive attitude you always seem to have.
Hi bjornpdx ,
I'm glad you gave this song of mine a listen
I'm super happy you dig my playing skills...means a lot to me .
Sure I understand how it is when listening to genre's of music that are different than what I'm accustomed to ...
To tell you the truth I had no idea as to what Genre of music my song fit into when I went to post it ...
So I created my own Genre . It's listed right there in the genre hash tag as # Kenfusion
As far as trying to keep a positive attitude , whew that sure is a tough one for me.
( thank you PTSD ) My life is a work in progress and I get Kenfused very easily . I try very hard to step back and keep my tongue and pen in check ...
At times I do suffer from an energy drain from having done battle with my Waring emotions that are constantly seeking expression in my dealings with my fellow man and women ....
IMHO, attempting to take the High Road seems to be the easier softer way ... the emotional pay off is far greater when it comes to finding moments of inner Peace ...no matter how fleeting ...
thank you for the song listen
timidi
Rock on Kenny Corea..
Hi Tim ,
I Love it & I Wish that one was true for sure .
When I was playing and writing this song I knew deep down in my heart that I was compensating for the fact that after all my years of playing the guitar , I had never learned how to play Chic Corea's Spain .....
that's my story and I'm sticking to it ..
thank you for the listen
Kenny