String Jammer
I love "earthy" songs and this one really intrigued me. Nice work gents!

Thank you Scott!

emeraldsoul
Originality abounds! Vocals as usual are exemplary. Mix choices work a treat.
 
My two observations would be, I found the mandolin a tad dry, maybe just a hint more of reverb?
 
And, when the vocals come in, they are significantly louder than the intro mandolin, so I actually reached for the volume knob to turn it down. I don't know if you could raise the volume of the initial mandolin intro, so it wouldn't jar the listener when the vocals come in?
 
really great song and great production! Oh, and before I let this go, I'll just say what I usually say on your guys' work - it's great without a bass, but holy smokes that could be a sweet add!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks Tom, glad you enjoyed it  I'll wait and see what anyone else has to say about the vocal/mando volumes.

Another excellent song. I like the contrast between the electric guitars and mandolin

Mannynyagain
Really, really good stuff here. Melancholy for sure - but a perfectly performed melancholia. Crisp , clean instruments (love the solo) and the vocals suits the lyrics so well. A bit of heartbreak pub-style (not quite sure what this means - but I could see myself sitting in a pub, working on my third Jamesons and then the folk duo in the corner starts playing this. I start blubbering and my pals decide it's time to send me home).
 

Thanks Manny, that's kind of you. Enjoyed the pub scenario too

What's not to like, intriguing lyrics thoughtfully written, vocal and other instruments beautifully captured, all in all a
 

Glyn Barnes
Another excellent song. I like the contrast between the electric guitars and mandolin

Thanks Glyn!

Wookiee
What's not to like, intriguing lyrics thoughtfully written, vocal and other instruments beautifully captured, all in all a
 

Thanks John!

Very nice indeed!!!  This is a beautiful song with excellent performances, lyrics,arrangement, vocals, and instrumentation.  The first couple of minutes reminded me of an old English style song.  The accents by the guitars and the build-up at the end were a perfect complement to the beginning.
 
Excellent!

Damn forum software...I posted on this one two days ago.
 
Anyway, very pretty song. I love the guitars you bring in during the chorus. Excellent work guys!
 
Regards,
Dan
 
 

Freddy J
Very nice indeed!!!  This is a beautiful song with excellent performances, lyrics,arrangement, vocals, and instrumentation.  The first couple of minutes reminded me of an old English style song.  The accents by the guitars and the build-up at the end were a perfect complement to the beginning.
 
Excellent!

Thank you Freddy!