Hallo Daryl,
Thank you for the song, it helped me to get out of the blue (a story with Cakewalk is a small part of it)... I really like it. It reminds me my lovely ELO with Jeff Lyn's phlegmatic manner of singing. :)
What is interesting, I just uploaded a lyrics version of my fourth song for a future mini-album (EP, 5 songs). I think, it has some similarity with your song concerning the message.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsWbQShkPngI guess, a song with the meaningful content could get more attention being presented with the lyrics line.
If you are interested, you could hear the rest of the songs also. I would be happy to have some feedback about it. I would also like to ask you some questions in personal message, so if it is OK, let me know and I will send it...
Sincerely,
Vladimir