Don't Let it Bring You Down

2018/01/15 21:23:51

Since the whole Cakewalk closure thing, I've been trying to finish off some tracks for release.
Hope you like the effort. I might redo the strings - I'm not sure if they work or not.
https://soundcloud.com/53mph/dont-let-it-bring-you-down-1

2018/01/16 01:39:18

bjornpdx

The piano and vocal sound very good together. I think the song needs more of a chorus element in there for variety and the lyrics could use some trimming. The strings are fine and are well placed in the song.

2018/01/16 15:04:11

jamesg1213

Nice song Philip, piano is lovely. I like the chorus, the verses don't flow as well though, could maybe use a rewrite here and there.

2018/01/16 22:36:05

Walt Collins

Nice mix, and a nifty little pop song, well performed. I think it mostly sounds great as-is, although maybe the piano could be reduced ever so slightly.

2018/01/17 08:50:06

burgerproduction

bjornpdx
The piano and vocal sound very good together. I think the song needs more of a chorus element in there

Thanks eveyone for the feedback. I've got a little question for Bjorn, when you say 'chorus element', do you mean chorus fx or the song structure? I'll try a rewrite and try reperforming it with live piano, when I get the chance.

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