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  • A Delicate Haze of Starlight (p.2)
2018/01/19 13:23:26
dcumpian
biodiode
dcumpian
Cool tune Adrian! I particular like the lead sound that comes in @ 1:25. The earlier lead sound could have used a bell-like sound layered over the top for some added definition, IMO. You did a good job mixing things up as you went.
 
Regards,
Dan



New mix uploaded with an added bell type lead and I've backed the general reverb off a touch.




I think the melody stands out a little better with the bell sound, but I might have gone up an octave (with the bell) and brought the other lead sound forward a bit more to blend it better. It's tough to mix from afar, so these are just things I think when I hear it. What's important is, do you like it?
 
Regards,
Dan
 
2018/01/19 14:31:57
biodiode
Thanks, Dan. I have put he bell lead up an octave like you suggested and it seems to give that section a nice percussive quality. Also noted one of my atmospheric introduction tracks was still aimed at my headphone channel so disappeared in the original bounce, it's back now 
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