daryl1968
you know I like this one Bobby - thought I'd give it a bump....

Thanks Daryl, honestly, I think you could sing it much better than me, no doubt about that. 
 
Thanks again!
 
Happy Holidays!  And "MERRY CHRISTMAS!". 
 
Bobby
 

I have got to agree with James1213 --- you have a great talent for creating "catchy pop/rock tunes."  I think that this one has a real commercial potential.  Your guitar work sounded really good.  I share the same concern about vocals a you do.  I thought that you did a respectable job concerning how complex the melody that you sang was.  There were a lot of note changes that you had to cover.
 
Nice work Bobby.

Nice one Bobby, it does what it says on the tin what more could you want, nicely played and produced.  (At least your singing does not kill like Wookiee singing does )

Freddy J
I have got to agree with James1213 --- you have a great talent for creating "catchy pop/rock tunes."  I think that this one has a real commercial potential.  Your guitar work sounded really good.  I share the same concern about vocals a you do.  I thought that you did a respectable job concerning how complex the melody that you sang was.  There were a lot of note changes that you had to cover.
 
Nice work Bobby.

Thank you Freedy J, I appreciate you taking the time to listen and reply. That means a lot to me. 
 
Happy Holidays! 
 
Bobby
 

Wookiee
Nice one Bobby, it does what it says on the tin what more could you want, nicely played and produced.  (At least your singing does not kill like Wookiee singing does )

 
Thank you Wookiee for listening and taking the time to reply. I'm going to work on it some more. 
 
I couldn't help but have a laugh with your comment "At least your singing does not kill like Wookiee singing does ". 
You never know what your talent is until you try. You should always keep trying, and the reason I laughed was because you sounded a lot like me. 
 
By that I mean : I am the AL BUNDY of Vocal Singers.  LOL : Dang Woman not only took my voice, but she made the strings on my guitar not play right either! Kidding of course. 
 
Thanks again for taking the time to listen and reply. 
 
Happy Holidays to you and yours and everyone here! 
 
Bobby
 

Nice song. I love the rock melody!

mikelgom
Nice song. I love the rock melody!

Thanks Mike, I appreciate you taking the time to listen and reply. I'm hoping to remix and re-do a few things on it in the future.  Funny thing is, this songs was never intended to be like it is now, I originally made it up more easy going with clean guitars throughout, but I wasn't happy with my sound and thought I would just turn on some distortion and change the chordings and this is the result. It was fun to do and I guess in the end that's the most import thing of all. 

Thanks again!  Happy Holidays!

Bobby
 

this really works well...vox sounds fine and shes a rocker...what's not to like? Very cool tune. like the duel leads...nice
 
Not a big fan of the panning on fade away...(takes more away then bring to the table)
 
good work!
 
 

thepogue
this really works well...vox sounds fine and shes a rocker...what's not to like? Very cool tune. like the duel leads...nice
 
Not a big fan of the panning on fade away...(takes more away then bring to the table)
 
good work!
 
 

Thank you for the kind words and taking the time to listen and reply. That means a lot. 
 
I am replying on Christmas eve so I must say : "Merry Christmas!!!! Happy holidays and Seasons Greetings to all!!!! 
 
 Thanks again for taking the time to listen and reply, I may remix this one in the future taking everyone's advice to heart here. 
 
Bobby
 

The harmonized solo rocks!  
 
Maybe vocals aren't your strong suit but as others said, they get the point across.    And fortunately you have the musicianship to back them up.