Well I never did this before. I produce EDM and well people tend not to be realy fond of that. Since we are all leaving and I learned a lot from this forum including the staff from Cakewalk.
 
Please give me some feedback.
 
Thanks,
 
Rizl 
 
https://soundcloud.com/rezab-2/i-know-wolly-edit

no one?
 
all the pointers to getting better are much appreciated.

Hi welcome to the songs forum, I would see if a local DJ would play it in a club, it has all those standard things that make it a EDM track.  Perhaps some of the voices could be a little less stereo.

Thank sounds kinda catchy.
Keep up the great work.

Nice song. I am feeling a DJ will tend to up-tempo this track in a club setting.

You have all the normal trademarks for a club track. Unfortunately I cannot comment too much on the mix as I am just getting over man flu, except to say that the bass end of the track feels right. 

Thank you very much Wookie. I would love for it to be played could you be there for me and check the womens backsides for the cause? Thanks for the tip. thank you very much. I am very curious what the results would be offcourse
 
@namphan1998 Thank you very much !
 
@simplemanz Thanks, hmmm so i shoulda produced it at a faster tempo ya think?
 
@biodiode Thanks man I appreciate it a bunch! please feel free to comment when you are better. Get wel soon :)
 
and yes I take it as a complement when you guys say I have the expected elements... I should, right?
 
Guys, if you like my song or would like to support me and my song at the spinninrecords talentpool;
 
https://www.spinninrecords.com/talentpool/track/192007-da-rizl-i-know-wolly-edit/ 
 
Thanks for the feedback, hope I get some more pointers.
 

Cool. I like the beat. Thanks for sharing.

Hi Rezab
I like it a lot - it has an Ibiza (holiday in the sun) feel.
Might be worth a try doing another mix at a faster bpm - my feeling is that this is too slow for a drink (and worse) infused club setting.
Very cool

Thanks guys!!!! :D
 
I am happy to share and that some of you like it!!!!
 
I will try to make it faster.... Should I post the faster version here or in a new thread?
Are there anymore places (maybe more EDM crowd oriented) I could post this for feedback?
 
Currently ranking #44 on Spinninrecords.com telentpool! thanks for the support guys!!!!!! :D check it out:
 
https://www.spinninrecords.com/talentpool/track/192007-da-rizl-i-know-wolly-edit/