It's a cool tune - I would have liked more clarity for the lead vocal in the mix.  I thought maybe the delay or reverb was too heavy - I'm not sure.

Hi Bats, Bjorn, and Doug.  Thank you very much for listening to this number and for your comments. 
 
Please excuse my delay in responding but I have been working on re-recording the vocal and BGV's.  That has been a task.  After about a dozen takes on the lead vocal I am finally at a stage where I think the vocals are almost acceptable.  I think that I still like the verb on the vocals but I know that I must be wrong because of all the comments that I received.  The world can't be wrong, so I must be.  I certainly will admit that the vocals are clearer, easier to understand, and well, OK, ya they do sound better.
 
Thanks to everyone that responded.  I do appreciate your input.  This kind of excellent input is certainly the value of this forum. 
 
Please let me know if any other improvements might help this song.  Thanks again.
 
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Hiya Freddy,
 
Apologies for not checking out the previous version... Enjoyed checking out this one though
 
No comments come to mind as I think it sounds just fine. All of the various elements fit very well together.
 
cheers
 
andy 

Hey Freddy. I really liked the out there slithery feel of this tune. Easy on the ears. Thanks for all the great tunes out here!

Just trying to catch up on responding and catching other's songs, since all this Cakewalk mess happened. 
 
Andy and Rhynosynth:  Sorry for the delay in responding.  I very much appreciate your kind comments.  Thank you.
If I don't see you on this forum, I'll see you on the beyondcakewalk.com site.  I just got signed up.
 
Cheers!

I think it sounds great - vocals nice and clear.  Love the lyrics!  

Thanks for listening Geno!  I appreciate the kind words and encouragement!