I liked it very much, and I liked the dripping cave of reverb, actually.
It took me to the fourth bar to realize what the rhythm of the song was. I think I caught a couple of other "timing moments" as things went along. You likely just felt it and didn't use a grid, so that's cool. It holds together pretty well I'd say, nice performances.
Minimal string finger squeakery! Way to kabosh those. Plus, the tuning was really accurate as well! Not an easy feat with what sounds like multiple twelve strings . . .
nice job!
-Tom