https://soundcloud.com/cris_camp/shine
 
I hope it sounds OK...

It sure does. I love it! terrific bounce, terrific break, and sonically stellar all the way through. Top mix.
 
-Tom

Thank You Tom ! ...You are being too nice :) .
  I listened to the song again after I took a little brake and I was a bit stumbled.  It took me a few seconds to  make sens of that baseline and the intro melody again. It just doesn't feel right. What I was thinking...?  Is it just me?
  I guess that I listened to it for too long and so my brain got adapted to it and i thought that it sounds good, but I'm not sure anymore.
 

Take a nap and come back. It's good to go.

No it's not you. The baseline and melody are quite random. It sounds OK, just random.

OK, Thanks ...I have to pay more attention on that from now on .
Here is a youtube link with a little better quality : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FhN_o0ehr68
 

Everything sounds sonically good on this track Chris. I would, however, say that when it all kicks in around the 1min mark the bass sequence just doesn't seem to fit in with the lead line, which seems to drift a fraction ahead. On the quiet less busy bits all is good.  

I think most would be leaping around to much to notice that things moved slightly strangely.

Nice mix thanks for sharing.