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  • Linnon - Sometime
2017/04/06 01:29:03
Lama876
At the moment working with an amazing singer \ songwriter with dark soulful female vocals and unique style,
 
https://soundcloud.com/linnon/sometime
 
Think this track almost done and should be ready after a few tweaks,
 
Just let me know if you would have any thoughts
 
2017/04/06 02:57:38
Hill62
Vocals are amazing! The drums are not up to par with the rest of the mix/musicianship to my ears. I enjoy the song over all.
2017/04/06 03:03:17
Lama876
Thank you for the feedback!
 
I would agree on drums, they are a bit simple at the moment and need some compression,
 
Kind regards
2017/04/06 11:17:50
Wookiee
Vocals are nice, the kick/drum is intrusive, I would consider side chaining the kick against the voice so it ducks when she sings.  Nothing wrong with minimalist drums, perhaps a full kit on the chorus to lift, but that would be a personal thing.

Thanks for sharing.
2017/04/16 02:31:41
Lama876
Interesting approach on the kick side chaining, will try that - thanks!
 
Think we will redo the drum section with a real drummer,
 
At the moment she creates a complete arrangement on her own with a keyboard.
 
 
2017/04/16 14:48:32
philz
Nice tune, needs work though production wise.
2017/05/03 09:06:32
Lama876
Thanks!
Yeah, will come up with an updated version soon.
2017/05/03 11:16:05
Voda La Void
Really nice tune and mood.  And it's catchy enough without being cliche.  I guess I'm the only one who doesn't hear an issue with the drums.  I like the imperfectly timed kick, and I like how stripped down everything is which seems to all compliment each other and fits the mood just real sweet.  
 
Don't have any crits...good song.  And yes, she has a great voice.  
2017/05/03 13:06:16
DeeringAmps
Maybe trying to over "produce" is not the way to go here.
After all, its all about the vocal; and that vocal is perfect!
Would I approach it a little different? Probably.
But that doesn't mean that its not "right" just as it is.
She's amazing!
I would tread carefully...
T
2017/07/17 04:01:12
Lama876
Thank you - much appreciated!
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