2017/10/28 04:47:29
bjornpdx
Ancestor Song
https://soundcloud.com/orygun/ancestor-song

Just trying something new. I'm not sure what this genre is even called. Hip hop I suppose.
So does this sound too dense, like there's too much going on? I wanted to bring out the bass more but then it was too much and then too little, so I don't know how it sounds now.

Thanks for listening.


Ancestor Song


My ancestors did it all themselves
They wandered where impulse led
They’d navigate by the sun and stars
The cold hard ground their bed

They didn’t mind the weather too much
They all were a hardy bunch   
Whenever they got hungry
They’d have a mammoth for lunch    

I've got digital and I go online  
They had their spears and arrows
Feeling pretty smug about my high tech world
But I've no idea how any of it works


I don’t know where North is
Don’t know how to start a fire
I take to my bed if the power goes out
‘Cause the situation’s too dire


I hunt and gather at the Safeway store
My shelter is air conditioned
 My clothes are more for looks than warmth
I love my television

Bug spray, sun screen, Eddie Bauer boots,
I can now venture out of my car
But only if it’s sunny out there
And the scenery isn’t too far.

Fight or flight never happens to me
Except with that  big dog down the street
Survival instincts only come out
Fighting all the traffic during rush hour

If I get stranded on a desert isle
And my cell phone, tablet and laptop  die
Then it would likely occur to me
So how do you make electricity?

Everything I have, everything I need
Was made by someone smarter than me
My ancestors tho did it all themselves
I guess they too were smarter than me

My ancestors they had it pretty rough
But they made a new generation
Life gets better moving up the family tree
It's been a long road to you and me

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2017/10/28 04:58:22
eph221
Brillyant!  Should win a grammy.  Only nit is when it went kind of syncopated against the iambic pentameter...sounded like it was unintentional.  Just think if kanye would sing this...  (The lyrics are too intelligent for him, no?  He has a reputation to uphold, you know.)  Everything I have was made by people smarter than me...etc is brillyant insight.
2017/10/28 11:01:12
jamesg1213
Nice one Bjorn, made me smile.
2017/10/28 14:11:11
Wookiee
 Just what I needed, thanks Bjorn.
2017/10/28 15:40:05
Makke
Wow, that's good. Nice lyrics and sounds.
2017/10/29 04:40:03
bjornpdx
David
Thank you. Well, maybe a Grammy for Most Out of His Element Award.

JamesG, Wookie and Makke
Thanks for listening. Appreciate the comments.
2017/10/30 18:57:51
stevec
Bjorn does raggae...  
 
Lyrics were great, some classic lines in there.
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