This was one of those troubling songs.  I knew what I wanted to say and what it should sound like.  The trouble was after recording I couldn't hear what I was thinking.  I must have trashed at least a half dozen tracks.  It is close enough now but I have listened to too many versions and attempts and now they have all melted together.  I am not sure what this one sounds like.  Therefore, I would appreciate any feedback, comments, crit.'s, etc. 
 
Thanks!!!
 
Lies Telling Lies
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=963481
 
 
 

Very entertaining. For some reason I was thinking bachman Turner overdrive,not sure why. Y

This is really good Freddy, possibly my favourite of yours so far. Excellent chorus. and I love those surf-ish guitar fills in the left channel. It certainly doesn't sound like it was a difficult process.

Cool guitar riffing and loving the sound of this one. Sounds well produced for this style, great stuff.

Freddy

Gotta say the lyrics are right on.

Love the driving beat throughout the song. Kind of reminds me of the Peter Gunn theme (and
that reference dates me some)  Seemed like the vocal was a tad off the beat here and there?

I always enjoy listening to your excellent guitar work.

Nice one. I liked this rock song and sounds. 

Freddy, your lyrics are the star of this show, though your singing and guitar playing support the words perfectly.  It has a raw, driving energy that can't be faked, and is very heartfelt.  That's what I like about you the best, you say what you mean and you mean what you say.  The opposite of whomever inspired this song.  Two thumbs up!

Hi David.  BTO I'll take that any day.  Thanks for taking time to listen and for your comments!!!
 
Hi James.  I'm very glad that you liked it and thanks for you kind feedback.  Ya, this one just "worried my mind" and nothing seemed to sound right.  Having read comments on this forum for a few years, I guess that this happens to some of us every once in a while.  It's nice when it turn out though.  Thanks again.
 
Thank you Adrian.  After the trouble that I had with this number, I appreciate your comments.
 
 

Nice tune.  I like the lyrics.  I listened on my studio monitors.  The only crits - I agree with Bjorn, there seems to be times when the vocals don't seem to line up with the beat.  I sense it more during the chorus.  Also, the low end seemed light.   If it helps - When I can't "hear" my tune or can't get my ideas tracked, I just don't listen or work on the song for about two weeks.  Sometimes longer.  A great DAW advantage.

Nice bit of raw sounding Freddy, nicely done, I agree it is a little light in the bottom end but hey it works, thanks for sharing.