A Dent in.....

Thanks for listening.

Nice!  I loved the drum rolls/double time at 1:35 or so.  It sounded like it wanted to branch off in another direction at that point.  Maybe you have another song from that idea.

ah! you snuck an electric guitar track in there?!
 
well, it's a cool sound for sure....
i dig the unison line melody....
i think you could mix the drums quite a bit hotter...
and still keep the ambience.
i like this.
should be furthered........
 
 

Thank you David, the "drums" are VSTi of Roto Tom's Called Royotoms 64bit free VSTi), as to branching who knows possibly.

Thank you Bat, sorry I should not encroach on your territory I promise to stay away for awhile.  As to furthering possibly who knows where the music will go. 

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Thanks Rik, it is how it appeared from the furry paws.

Hi Wookiee ,
 
Yeah Dent was pretty nice I liked the guitar and Bass unison parts .
Really dug the time based delays and effects , they added nice movement to the song as it unfolded ...
At 1:32 the guitar and the bass had what seemed to be a minor slip up in note selection . the guitar slide note ?
 
anyway cool tune ,
 
Kenny
 

Thanks Kenny I will check and see what bum note my furry paws played.

It is the one guitar note that slides around the note at 1 : 32 ....it doesn't gel well w the bass note ...
other than that the tune was great
 
Kenny
 

A close look at it shows that the Synclavier is playing a duff note and there is an F# followed by a C on the guitar that is not reflected in the Bass.  So I will need to have a little tweak, perhaps Melodyne can help.