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I think I would call this prog... I like the ending??

kzmaierI like the ending??

Ending came too soon Ken!!!
 
Seriously, though, I enjoyed the listen... Nicely done
 
cheers
 
andy

Nice enough groove going with this and the mix sounds reasonable, I do wonder if perhaps a little more presence in the lead voice would not go a miss or dare I suggest perhaps  a vocal. 

Hi, Ken,
 
Dynamite job on this tasty instrumental with lots of cool textures woven throughout the clean, crisp sounding mix!
 
I Really like how the clean guitar melodies floating over the synths and backing tracks give it a sunny outdoor feel, like taking a pleasant drive in the countryside. 
 
Great stuff, Ken! 
 
Have a good one!
Bob
 

Very good mix well played -- perhaps you'll add a vocal? 

Nice. Balanced mix to my ears.

I liked it. Nice one. :-)

Can't call it prog - too well-structured and not even a little self-indulgent. But you can call it pleasant, that's for sure.
 
To me the mix sounds a bit muffled, but that may be my HF-challenged old-man ears. Part of that's due to a lot of frequency overlap between the bass, rhythm and lead guitars, so I'd start with some surgical EQ to help separate them. You might also want to experiment with a harmonic exciter, which can add a little sparkle on top. If you don't have anything fancy (e.g. FabFilter Saturn or iZotope Harmonic Exciter) on hand, try the free Roth-AIR. Try it on drum overheads to start, then maybe on the lead guitar.

Pleasant instrumental music. I liked the tune and arrangement. Nice sounds

Sorry for the double post