This is a great tune.  The lyrics are really cool.

Hi Daryl and Lynn,
 
You guys came up with some very nice sounds and elements for the musical end of the song . Also I found your lyrics and singing style to be very clever and fitting for what constitutes a relationship in today's world  ...
 
 
Kenny

Wookiee
This is a great line

Lynn and Daryl
you fit me like a foot in a glove

Sounds good here Daryl and Lynn.

Thanks Wookiee

bapu
Nais job guise.

Cheerz m8

Hi Daryl and Lynn,
 
Nice collaboration! I'm not familiar with Lynn's work but I'm sure in time that will change. I can clearly hear Daryl's influence in this. Sound quality is great. Lyrics are plentiful and put together nicely. So many nice things one can listen to on this journey. Brilliant arrangement and a lot of talent here. Much enjoyed!
 
Dean

eph221
furries!  sounds good.

Ha!
Thanks mate

jamesg1213
strong Squeeze vibe from this one.

Yeah, thats it, I was trying to put my finger on it,
"So we started our 'relationship', it was like living on the Gaza Strip" - Classic!
 
 

jamesg1213
Another cool collab, strong Squeeze vibe from this one. Liking the guitars weaving around the vocal. Very nice work chaps!

Cheers mate

Great lyrics, nice guitar work.  I particularly like the quiet-ish piano-based interlude toward the end.  As noted, strong Squeeze vibe.  Very enjoyable!
 
 

michaelhanson
Another excellent forum's collab!  This is nicely written and well performed by you both.  The mix sounds good to me, no crits here.  

Thanks Michael