Loved the song, it's very uplifting.  Only crit I have is that on the *ee* syllable throughout the fundamental pitch can waver a little (usually going sharp).  I tried to sell  a song that had ee couplets throughout (in the the lyrics) and the guy said that it can get a little repetitive on that particular syllable.  couplet is a pair of lines of metre in poetry. A couplet usually consists of two lines that rhyme and have the same metre.  :D:D

Hello, Reece. Terrific arrangement. Very tasty lead guitar bit, and the bgv sit perfectly in the mix, something I wish I would learn to do. To my admittedly suspect ears, the drums sound a little boxy, but otherwise a pristine mix. Great work.

I thought it was great in every way. Honestly. I can't offer any constructive criticism because I don't think I could say anything that would better the song or the performance. It's hard to improve on "just right."

Nice mix. Great tones on the instrumentation - sincere delivery. What more could you want.

I'd echo the nice comments above! The vocals blend really, really well. Guitars are a nice electric/acoustic balance.
 
I listened on headphones, and for a mix thought, maybe add a little more upper mids to the bass. On headphones the bass disappears a bit. Have you listened to your mix through earbuds? I bet there's not much bass that comes through - you might poke up a bass bump around 300-400 hz just to see if it translates better on the smaller speakers.
 
nice one!
 
-Tom

Sounds like you and the other chaps have got another winner Reece, good job Michael, Sean and Mrs. Beagle.

Stop working on this song right now. It's done. Anything you add or take away will diminish it. Every single instrument is clear but blends perfectly. And it's a great song too! One thing you can do; write down and send to me every single thing you did to get such a pristine and beautiful sound. 

eph221
Loved the song, it's very uplifting.  Only crit I have is that on the *ee* syllable throughout the fundamental pitch can waver a little (usually going sharp).  I tried to sell  a song that had ee couplets throughout (in the the lyrics) and the guy said that it can get a little repetitive on that particular syllable.  couplet is a pair of lines of metre in poetry. A couplet usually consists of two lines that rhyme and have the same metre.  :D:D

thank you David - I appreciate the listen and your thoughts!  thank you!

mcourter
Hello, Reece. Terrific arrangement. Very tasty lead guitar bit, and the bgv sit perfectly in the mix, something I wish I would learn to do. To my admittedly suspect ears, the drums sound a little boxy, but otherwise a pristine mix. Great work.

Hey Mark!  thanks so much!  It's taken me a few years to get to where I can do this and sometimes I still mess it up! LOL!  thanks for the comments!  appreciate it very much! 

Reece, this is a terrific production.  All the performances feel inspired which makes this fun to listen to.  I like it the way it is, and I look forward to hearing more from this group.  Congratulations to all.