Jmanque dair

2017/09/27 21:57:37

savoy

hi there
i would like you listen this mix(no vocals i will add the vocal if you say the MIX is good)

any feedback,coments & advices

thanks

martin

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2017/09/27 22:29:50

eph221

Well, It sounds like a nice song. My only comment is the pick noise (nail noise?) you could beef up your guitars with a little less of that. But maybe you like the nail noise. It's not terribly awful.

2017/09/28 00:37:14

savoy

thank you eph221

2017/09/28 18:10:25

Wookiee

Pleasant sounding track will keep the ears (yes they are furry) open for the addition of the lyrics.

2017/09/28 19:43:51

savoy

thanks alot Wookiee !!!

i will mix the vocal & re-post it here

cheer
martin

2017/09/29 00:44:54

emeraldsoul

the strummed electric as presented is a little trebly and thin. I'm thinking around :24 and forward. The arpeggiated single strums are pretty solid.

Ovation guitar, perhaps?

Once the bass/drums kick in, it shines. Really nice composition.

-Tom

2017/09/29 12:31:48

savoy

thx Tom i apreciate!

2017/10/04 20:04:26

bapu

Other have mix crits. I'll just say I like it. Thanks for sharing.

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