MY NEW VALENTINES SONG

Hello everyone, I just finished copyrighting online this new song , its a VALENTINE
LOVE SONG .
THE SONG IS CALLED " I'M IN LOVE "

http:// www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=891378&songID=7204212

Any REVIEWS would be helpful , I wanted to enter it in a Valentines song contest next month .
The Vocals I do know I need to redo again but for now this will have to do .

Thanks!

Hey Bert Guy are you using the TOP link , it works for me I go right to my song after clicking NO for INTERNET EXPLORER .
Not sure why that BOX pops up wanting to know if I want to close it down,I click no and then it takes me to my SONG PAGE on the SoundClick website.

Let me know how it works so I can try to fix it if its not working , thanks !

Thanks jamesg1213 your right the vocals are not as good as I wanted them to be , at the time I was coming down with this flu or really bad cold the start of it and I sort of rushed through it so I would have the song ready for my wifes christmas gift .
I had planned on redoing the Vocals because wasn't my best I thought.
As for the lyrics the ( I'm in Love ) it was repeated a bit too much your right but on the other hand I sort of wanted it to be , it was a love song with a strong HOOK to it all throughout the song .
I'm a beginner song writer who still needs to work on his song writing that I do understand but you have to get started somewhere and hopefully improve .

Thanks KEV for your comments on this song , sometime this month I plan on redoing the Vocals just as soon as my toe heals up.
I had the nail completely removed from an ingrown nail and right now its really sore so much so I'm not working with my music right now , going back to the doctor today to have him look at it again just in case .

The song by the way was recorded using Magix's Music Studio 12 Deluxe , its not the best to work with.
Last month I purchase SONAR HOME STUDIO 7 XL and for my drums I purchased ADDICTIVE DRUMS and just last week I purchase RAPTURE 1.0 now updated to 1.1 with the EXPANSION PACKS INCLUDED.

Your setup is really nice I see and your sound is clean and very professional , I love the song you do " TIME " .
Your song writing skills are very professional too , with some work and with time I hope to be able to write at the level of writing your at right now .

Thanks again for your support , HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Thanks for the tips VENUS OR Dena , I checked out your song and I have to say I'm impressed . The Vocals on my song I had planned on redoing again and your right the MIX really isn't as good as your songs.
Mixing is something I need to work on thats for sure ,thanks for the TIPS!


Great Stuff your playing , I like your voice and Vocals really sounds great !