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Sixfinger
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2017/05/20 00:15:40 (permalink)

Make The World Better

https://soundcloud.com/washedup-3/make-the-world-better-demo-1
 
All thoughts on how to make the song better are welcome too.

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    stevesweat
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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/21 15:31:41 (permalink)
    Cool song and sounds pretty good. there is a buzz in one of the guitars that is a bit much for me. it almost sounds like the amp has a torn speaker. i'm all for a nice raunchy distortion and you're real close to a nice tone just the buzz cuts through a little harshly in places. vocals are cool and i like the stereo placements of everything.

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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/21 16:32:50 (permalink)
    Wayne, this is a terrific song and worth listening to several times.  The lyrics are timely, and the arrangement and performances are spot on.  Congrats on writing a good song, and thanks for sharing.

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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/21 19:13:26 (permalink)
    Steve I couldn't agree more. If it's the same part I'm thinking ( the melody in the interludes) I have every intention of playing that through a real amp instead of the sim. Perhaps take a closer look at all of the parts.
     
    Lynn thanks! I'm glad you get the intent :)

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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/22 18:44:32 (permalink)
    Cooool...  Love the vibe.   Lyrics are great too, go perfectly with the music.   I sorta forgot about the mix while listening though - got distracted by the content.      Oh, and those fuzzy lines were a nice touch. 

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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/31 13:03:09 (permalink)
    Well done!
    If I was mixing it, I would bring up the vocal just a bit, and the solo guitar.
    But the mix is a "performance", I'm not sure there is ever just one "perfect" mix.
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    Re: Make The World Better 2017/05/31 13:30:34 (permalink)
    very cool song Wayne - nice warm mix too.

      
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