Marry you tonight

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2011/12/19 19:45:13 (permalink)

Marry you tonight

Hi, I've the pleasure to work with a new song writer for the girls and I...and this is a draft we've done for a good friend just off the press last night. Could use your opinions. Not that comfortable with the first few bars of panning but want to know if you feel the same way amongst any other feedback you can offer. I centre it back in but could use opinions on that transition. http://soundcloud.com/tonehook/marry-you-tonight Thank-you

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    Scottytunes
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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/20 06:08:03 (permalink)
    I like it. Great song and performances! The panning adds a nice effect at the beginning. The bass seems a little boomy and the vox could stand to be a little louder IMO.

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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/23 05:30:20 (permalink)
    Hi Flavio/Sophie/Katrina. Not to sure if like the panning. I'm listening with the cans tho. It is kind of cool when the vox first move to the center. It's amazing what really good singers can do with such a nice simple song musically. The harmonies are awesome and it's like you've been singing together your whole life. Very enjoyable song. Merry Christmas all.
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    thalweg
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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/23 11:45:05 (permalink)
    Thanks Scotty and Rhyno! THis is still a very very rough draft. Kristen is our new song writing partner and she sung this as a draft for Lanita and Sophie. Its a simple tune...still need to re-track everything and get better sonics. We also changed up the arrangement a bit to get some more dynamics. Really appreciate the helpful feedback. Cheers

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    bapu
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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/23 12:09:12 (permalink)
    Thanks for sharing that song.

    Very nice.

    The mix/voices (to me) sounds very mid-rangy. Not a complaint just an observation.
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    thalweg
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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/23 14:00:56 (permalink)
    Thanks Bapu and I agree...its more so the piano...on the analyser it tops out at about 2K. The point of the this forum is to be critical so complaints are welcome! Thanks appreciate the feedback.

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    Re:Marry you tonight 2011/12/23 20:17:45 (permalink)
    I have reservations about the panning at the beginning. I think they need to be brought closer in or maybe add something in the middle.

    Sounding much better though. when the vocals move to the centre.

    This is a nice song and ui warmed to the understated arrangement. Lovely singing too.

    The acoustic guitar sounds well recorded with a nice organic sound.

    Enjoyed.
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