I don't listen to a lot of this kind of music, but your playing shows a lot of skill, obviously born of training.  I love your octaves in the beginning part.  There are some slight rhythmic issues at times - you anticipated the phrase a bit at 0:58, and there were a couple of other places where you seemed a little behind the beat, probably because you were trying not to push the pick too hard and the note didn't quite come out at the instant you were hearing in your head.
 
I thought your solo work was pretty creative overall, although it's a style that is over my head so I'm probably not the best critic.
 
I know this is not the point of the exercise, but I want to add that I did enjoy listening the piece quite a bit, although I found it quite short in length (not your choosing of course), so I had to replay it several times. :)

Nice Kenny.
Ya know, My favorite note was at :31. It had some rawness to it and wasn't so pristine.
Just sayin.