Memory Lane (Re-Work)

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Boomin36Beatz
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2013/10/31 20:13:46 (permalink)

Memory Lane (Re-Work)

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Call it Memory Lane
Re-working this one here
Would like to know what you think off the sound and composition.
 before:
http://soundcloud.com/boomcityrock/memory-lane
 after:
http://soundcloud.com/boomcityrock/memory-lane2
 
Thanks in advance
 
RFK
post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2013/11/03 05:03:49
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    Lynn
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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/10/31 20:25:32 (permalink)
    You have a good base for a song here.  I hope to hear it fully developed sometime.

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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/10/31 22:01:11 (permalink)
    I agree with Lynn. You have a lot of room for way more happening in this piece. Like to see how this develops.
     
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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/10/31 22:58:54 (permalink)
    Sounds like a soundtrack to an old console video game.  Very retro.  It does seem to go on quite a long while though, without much changing throughout the song.

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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/11/01 14:50:46 (permalink)
    First of all thank you very much for listening and giving feedback.

    @Lynn
    i will try to :-)
    and once again thanks.

    @John
    room for vocals
    after adding vocals
    i will be able to give it the final human touch.

    @Waltenstein
    i love retro stuff and that's what i have been aiming for so i am on the right way :-)
    Maybe the length 3:36 would be better
    but the verses on my mind need that length.

    guys sorry for that late reply but my highspeed data volume reached its limit so even writing back
    this here is really heavy to handle and i did try to download something you know what i mean ;-)
    i want and will listen to your work when i get back some more speed on my inet connection.
    so please dont get me wrong
    THANKS
    RFK
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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/11/03 05:06:26 (permalink)
    it took me about an hour to upload this here so i gotta give it a bump!!!
    changed chorus
    redifined instruments
    cleaned up the mix
    it is still empty but i am getting closer i guess
     
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    Re: Memory Lane (Re-Work) 2013/11/03 15:21:48 (permalink)
    I can't hear much difference in the new version, except that there seem to be a few low-volume melodic instruments added, which I think do help a bit.  They could probably come up even more, since there's not a lot else going on.

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