Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION

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2014/07/26 10:52:44 (permalink)

Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION

I'm still trying to get things balanced right...not 100% yet. Any suggestions welcome. Thanks!
 
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    ssebech
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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/26 12:15:18 (permalink)
    Hi, I would suggest to use less effect on the vocals during the main verse lines - I mean these:
    Is it all just for a show? Don't you think that they don't know?
    How long will you play this game?
    I really thought that you would change, that it would be different now. It's all still the same.
    I really thought that you would change, that it would be different now, It's all still the same.
    The rest is OK as is.
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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/26 13:24:07 (permalink)
    Or yet have the effect on the first part of main verse line, and from there no effect, or alternate every line. I thought the guitar strumming thru out ie :50 might sound better without reverb as well as guitar section in middle, since that effect is used in the vocals. Otherwise its a cool neat tune, really like it, just wish I could sing without killing anyone.

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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/26 21:09:41 (permalink)
    The balance is pretty good so far. I'd bring the bass up a tad. Reduce the amount of FX going on, I feel that they're making your mix sound small. Singing is good :) Looking forward to hearing your update.
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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/27 08:43:28 (permalink)
    Bring down the reverbs, particularly on the drums. Make the drums hit a little harder and tie them better to the bass to get more drive. This is a cool song, just needs a bit more focused energy.
     
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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/27 16:11:01 (permalink)
    The instrumental break: There's a melody in there, and I want to hear it, but the tone and FX mask it and make it all sound a bit grating and chaotic and mechanical. 

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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/27 16:45:37 (permalink)
    Great vibe. Your vocal is a great fit. But the mix IMHO needs to be more focused and upfront. Bigger drums.

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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/07/31 14:25:00 (permalink)
    Cool song, Tim!  Nice work on the vocals. 
     
    As already mentioned a little mix work should do it - less/more automated FX throughout (though I like the backwards effect), a little less mid-highs on the lead guitars, and maybe some additional punch on the drums (a thicker/less buzzy snare for me).   
     

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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/08/06 10:38:13 (permalink)
    First off- Thanks for all the comments!!!!!!!!
     
    I took everyones advice here. I remixed this with a more up front feel to it. I backed off the reverb and dealt with some slight phasing between tracks.

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    Re: Mix in progress- A SURFACE SENSATION 2014/08/12 14:59:13 (permalink)
    Sounds like it's coming along to me!   Definitely cleaned up and more forward which I think works well, but still with some of the psychedelic FX that seem to fit the feel of the song.  
     

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