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2017/01/27 13:33:45 (permalink)

My Education

If someone could be kind, please tell me how to improve this violin line.  The thing that jumps out at me is the way the vibrato is sickeningly predictable.  How do I change that, and what other improvements can I make?
 
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    tcolton5
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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 14:06:54 (permalink)
    Sounds real good to me.  

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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 14:11:53 (permalink)
    I liked it too. The vibrato didn't bother me, I was just listening to the melody which was excellent.

     
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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 16:14:41 (permalink)
    I also liked it - I have a theory that you knew we would like it and played the humble card in your post :)
    Well played sir

      
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    eph221
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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 19:10:05 (permalink)
    Why is everyone being nice to me all of a sudden.  Is my demise imminent?

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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 19:14:56 (permalink)
    eph221
     Is my demise imminent?

    yes and no
     
    as to the vibrato, it sounds as if there is absolutely nothing wrong, to me that is
     
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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 19:33:36 (permalink)
    thx men.  I guess I shouldn't worry about it.

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    Re: My Education 2017/01/27 19:39:33 (permalink)
    Can I borrow a cup of that?

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    Re: My Education 2017/01/29 09:42:08 (permalink)
    eph221
    Why is everyone being nice to me all of a sudden.  Is my demise imminent?




    Not being 'nice', just honest. It's a good tune.

     
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    Re: My Education 2017/01/29 12:27:32 (permalink)
    I can not hear any vibrato, actually I think this may be one of those tracks were you need to turn it up a tad as I could hear nothing and the wave form was invisible. 😎
     

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