My First Produced Song - Contemporary Christian Song - God of Peace

Really good for a first mix. I don't like the delay onthe vocals one bit. Its destracting.
Some timing issues from the band. The clicks on the snare are lost. It sounds like the bassist is pushing the drummer, but the drum part needs work.

One or two issues, the first time she sings 'noble' there's some horrible digital clipping, probably on her vocal. The bass drum sounds nice with a fat round bass like that. The whole thing lacks top end attack for me. The guitar tone for the solo sounds very out of place.

The harmonies could do with tightening.

But overall very good for a first mix.

Think about this. If you're a band, you're likely to be in the same place and want to put that across. However, this sounds as though the drummer is about a mile away from the rest of the band. The vocals are VERY upfront and so is the bass. So i get a feeling of the band being disjointed by the position in the mix. Try using a slight convolution reverb on the master bus to bring everything together.

This brings me to my final point. The piano sound seems to be fighting against the bass in the low end and the guitar in the mids. Its important to try to find a space in the mix for each instrument so that everything is clear and audiable but the mix sounds very full and the band sounds together. To learn this, try mixing with just signal strength, pan and EQ. That'll give you a better understanding of how different sounds work together in a mix.

But having said all that, overall its really nice for a first attempt, very good indeed.