Re:My First Songs Using Sonar 8!!! Tell me what you think!
2010/07/20 18:04:10
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I listened to Take the Time. Sounds pretty good overall and definitely worth finishing - I was hearing a vocal melody in my head pretty much straight away. You could always try recording some vox just to present the idea - I'm no singer either, but I've found that people on here are usually pretty understanding of that and will comment constructively on your ideas even if the delivery is a bit dodgy ;)
Mix wise, I think you could do a little work on the drums to separate them a bit and maybe tweak the eq some to bring them out a little. That said, I'm only listening on little earbuds, so might be best to wait for some other comments and see if others are hearing it the same before you go and change anything.
As usual I will add my usual disclaimer that I'm no kind of expert and these are just my opinions as a listener. Welcome to the forum and I look forward to hearing some more of your work.