My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time)

Author
Post
Essentials Only Full Version
Mooch4056
Max Output Level: -0.5 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 7494
  • Joined: 2005/02/19 17:40:35
  • Location: Chicago
  • Status: offline
2013/02/14 19:24:39 (permalink)

My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time)




The Story. 

We made each other Valentines gifts this year 

When Liz woke up she had a home made card on the door to get into the garage and then on her steering wheel, and hr windshield wiper. All made with markers and creativity. When she got home from work I player her this song. 

I started writing/recording this at 3:00Pm Chicago Time and had it ready for her when she came home at 4:30

it has am Intro - Verse And  Chourus 

Here's what it needs .. it needs a better mix ... better lyrics that are not scatted with a hand held 58... it needs a bridge ... and probably a much better singer than me ... 

none the less she was very happy and Ill probably get laid tonight and thats the important thing 


I'll finish the song and put it on my CD over the summer - its a work in progress and didn't even exist at all 3 hours ago ... I played everything including drums .. no loops here 

https://soundcloud.com/mo...r-happy-valentines-day


From Now On Call Me Conquistador! 
 
Donate to the cure Bapu Foundation
Email: mooch4056@gmail.com for more info




#1

8 Replies Related Threads
    bapu
    Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 86000
    • Joined: 2006/11/25 21:23:28
    • Location: Thousand Oaks, CA
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/14 19:38:17 (permalink)
    Love it Mooch.
    (the part about getting laid)
    post edited by bapu - 2013/02/14 19:40:00

    My name is Ed. I Am still bapu though.
    My Studio
     
    www.beyondmydaw.com
     
    The Forum Monkeys
    BJZ
    BBZ 
    The Coffee House Collaborators 
    Fizzy Pickle
    The Coffee House Band
    Stan Dupp and The Jennifer Tillies
    BAPU
    #2
    Mooch4056
    Max Output Level: -0.5 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 7494
    • Joined: 2005/02/19 17:40:35
    • Location: Chicago
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/14 20:26:51 (permalink)
    bapu


    Love it Mooch.
    (the part about getting laid)

    This is the best musical critique you ever gave anyone 

    From Now On Call Me Conquistador! 
     
    Donate to the cure Bapu Foundation
    Email: mooch4056@gmail.com for more info




    #3
    Old55
    Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 19791
    • Joined: 2008/09/19 20:10:05
    • Location: Californiashire
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/14 20:32:10 (permalink)
    I like it, Mooch.  Good job.  

    Should auld acquaintance be forgot--hey, who the hell are you guys?  
     
    X2(X3 pending hardware upgrade), Emulator X2, E-mu 1212M, Virtual String Machine
    #4
    The Maillard Reaction
    Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 31918
    • Joined: 2004/07/09 20:02:20
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/14 20:37:22 (permalink)


    I like the song form and the strong guitar part opening. I also like the bass line a bunch. Drums sounded grungy and fit in the mix nicely.

    I would have asked bapu to sing it.


    :-]

    all the best,
    mike
    post edited by mike_mccue - 2013/02/14 20:38:31


    #5
    bapu
    Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 86000
    • Joined: 2006/11/25 21:23:28
    • Location: Thousand Oaks, CA
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/14 20:46:19 (permalink)
    mike_mccue

    I would have asked bapu to sing it. 
    You may have just lost a friend in Mooch.


    Ok, seriously Mooch. I did like the overall vibe and feel of this WIP. I'll be excited to hear how it turns out.

    My name is Ed. I Am still bapu though.
    My Studio
     
    www.beyondmydaw.com
     
    The Forum Monkeys
    BJZ
    BBZ 
    The Coffee House Collaborators 
    Fizzy Pickle
    The Coffee House Band
    Stan Dupp and The Jennifer Tillies
    BAPU
    #6
    Bub
    Max Output Level: -3.5 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 7196
    • Joined: 2010/10/25 10:22:13
    • Location: Sneaking up behind you!
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/15 16:50:46 (permalink)
    Howdy Mooch.

    Ya know, there's something about this I like. Maybe it's unconventionality? :) It's good.

    "I pulled the head off Elvis, filled Fred up to his pelvis, yaba daba do, the King is gone, and so are you."
    #7
    Mooch4056
    Max Output Level: -0.5 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 7494
    • Joined: 2005/02/19 17:40:35
    • Location: Chicago
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/16 00:44:13 (permalink)
    Bub


    Howdy Mooch.

    Ya know, there's something about this I like. Maybe it's unconventionality? :) It's good.

    Thanks Bub! :) 

    From Now On Call Me Conquistador! 
     
    Donate to the cure Bapu Foundation
    Email: mooch4056@gmail.com for more info




    #8
    philz
    Max Output Level: -50.5 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 2462
    • Joined: 2004/04/11 13:50:46
    • Location: Shrewsbury, PA, USA
    • Status: offline
    Re:My Valentines Day Song For The Lovely Lady (except it's mooch and not bapu this time) 2013/02/16 12:12:52 (permalink)
    Nice tune, Mooch.  Love the bass and guitar feel.  I think you brought the vocal home too.  Good job.

    phil
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1050818&content=music
    https://soundcloud.com/phil-doyle-292979186
    Coffeehouse Band-http://thecoffeehouseband.com/armageddon/
    DD&C-http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1053137
    #9
    Jump to:
    © 2024 APG vNext Commercial Version 5.1