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2012/02/26 16:31:27 (permalink)

My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away"

This is the first song I've been able to do in a long time.  Comments welcome.

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    PGShadow
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/26 17:22:34 (permalink)
    Nice mix,everything has its own space. Really like the kick and bass definition and how they work well together. Very nice lead work and tone. Only thing I'm not crazy about is the opening guitar tone.
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/26 17:22:56 (permalink)
    Great stuff. Wish I could play like that.

    I'm going deaf, or at least my Doc tells me that because he wants to sell me $6000 hearing aids. But because of that my only comment besides Great Job would be what did you use for the Drums and I would have tweaked them up a few pubes for my liking but that's why I'm probably going deaf.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/26 17:29:07 (permalink)
    Nice tune, Mark, and really well played.  Great tone.  I enjoyed the listen very much.
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/26 20:35:46 (permalink)
    It's been awhile since you posted anything..... good to hear you back again.

    Nice tone. Excellent picking. 

    There was something that almost felt off with the drums in a few places...... an awkward sort of hesitation in a few places. 

    The tone on the first guitar didn't bother me as much as the extreme right panning. It stayed that way through out....  and it also had a few awkward sounding timing issues to my ears. 

     I like the song. 

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/26 21:34:33 (permalink)
    Great mix on this Mark.  Love where that rhythm sets in the mix.   Cool licks and cool harmonies.  The bridge/ending guitar and percussion is very cool.

    One of your best I think.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 03:56:53 (permalink)
    Grand stuff Mark, really like this one. I'd like to see a vid of this please! Love to check out some of those licks, like that beautiful little harmony thing at 1:05. Some very lyrical phrasing in here, cool shredding too. That spacey breakdown was a surprise, works really well though.

     
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 04:33:06 (permalink)
    Hey, Mark,

    Dynamite instrumental with killer playing and a nice, clean, wide mix!  The guitar tones are perfect, and the fluidity of your playing is absolutely stellar.

    Great stuff, buddy, really well done!
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 10:58:14 (permalink)
    As the others have said, nice guitar work.  The mix sounds good on my speakers.  The song itself was a nice guitar solo, and it ended on a nice riff, but other than that, there were no surprises.  I just think when doing rock instrumentals it takes a little extra to capture the imagination because guitar solos are a dime a dozen.  Nevertheless, you have the chops to do something really interesting.  I'm looking forward to hearing more of your stuff.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 11:02:03 (permalink)
    PGShadow - Thanks for the comments. 


    Vettetech - Thanks.  The drums are "Drums on Demand" loops.  They probably could come up a bit.  That's one of the things I go back and forth on when I mix.


    Philz - Hey Phil.  How you doing?  Glad you like it.


    Guitarhacker - Hey Herb.  Yeah I don't get here much anymore.  I think some of the timing issues are the drum fills I put in after the recording was set.  One of the problems with loops.  You're stuck with what they offer.


    darylcrowley - Hey Daryl.  Thanks for the comments.  I've been kinda woodshedding lately and really practicing a bunch.  This jam came about from my practice sessions.  I'm proud of the mix, especially the drum/bass relationship.


    james1213 - James, how you doing?  Thanks for the comments.  I don't know if I've got any vids in my near future.  Been so damn busy.  The ending came out of not knowing how to bridge or finish the song.  I was going to do a slow chimey part and then get back to the melody for a finale.  But I had kind of beaten the melody to death by then and decided to just zone out with the floaty thing.

    Bob Oister - Hey Bob, great to see you.  Thanks for the comment on my fluidity.  I've been working very hard lately on just that and it looks like it paid off if you noticed.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 12:08:52 (permalink)
    Lynn


    As the others have said, nice guitar work.  The mix sounds good on my speakers.  The song itself was a nice guitar solo, and it ended on a nice riff, but other than that, there were no surprises.  I just think when doing rock instrumentals it takes a little extra to capture the imagination because guitar solos are a dime a dozen.  Nevertheless, you have the chops to do something really interesting.  I'm looking forward to hearing more of your stuff.


    Thanks for listening.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 12:43:11 (permalink)
    Marc,
    It's always great hearing your stuff.  This was no exception.  I loved it! 
     
    Thanks for sharing.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/27 17:17:24 (permalink)
    Wow...... mark this sounds fantastic....only little nit was the rhythm guit on the right got a bit over used but thats just MPO...Your Leads and Solos sounded GREAT!!!!!!


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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/02/29 21:35:29 (permalink)
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    Marc,
    It's always great hearing your stuff.  This was no exception.  I loved it! 
     
    Thanks for sharing.


    Thanks Richard.  Glad you liked it.



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    Wow...... mark this sounds fantastic....only little nit was the rhythm guit on the right got a bit over used but thats just MPO...Your Leads and Solos sounded GREAT!!!!!!


    Thanks Allan.  I may have to look at the rythm guitar again.  Several people have stated that it needs revision.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/01 17:40:07 (permalink)
    well done Mark... great touch & tone...
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/01 19:04:59 (permalink)
    hi mark great guitar tones and licks mix is great well done thanks eric
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/01 22:01:12 (permalink)
    Hi Mark,

    Man, your guitar sounds great! The playing ain't too shabby either

    I'm listening on a laptop but the mix sounds fine. Always a pleasure to hear you tear it up!

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/01 22:58:56 (permalink)
    Nice Mark! Very Vai-sque.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/02 17:35:36 (permalink)
    Thanks Frank, Eric, Gary and Scott. I'm glad you like.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/02 18:08:27 (permalink)
    hey Mark great sounding song here - the lead is nicely balanced as against the backing track. drums could be a hair louder but no bigger. some nice lead riffs here, love the hook. this might be my favourite of yours yet, it just flows nicely. like the ending too, though i would have flung a bass solo in there!

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/04 10:07:05 (permalink)
    Pretty tasty stuff here my friend. Nice clean mix, with all the components working nicely together. Interesting percussion on that little breakdown section at the end. The chimes are an excellent touch. Glad to hear you back with some new stuff.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/04 10:16:32 (permalink)
    Hi Mark, 
    Great playing!  I love the lead.  Drums are done well too.  You use speed melodically and not just for show which I appreciate very much.  The percussion break is nice.  Maybe the song starts with the bells and a bit of that section, then goes into the main body, and then ends with it?  Super job. 

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/04 14:43:06 (permalink)
    Nice job Mark I enjoyed it.  Could hear a few clicks in a couple of place which could just be dear old sound-click.

    Thanks for sharing. 
     
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/06 13:56:13 (permalink)
    Thanks Mark.  I agree, drums should come up a bit.

    Thanks Randy.  I was wondering if anyone was going to comment on the chimes.  I think they fit nicely.

    Rimshot- thanks.  That might be a good idea about starting the song sith some of the outro.  I'll have a look at that.  Thanks.

    John, thanks for the comments.  I think the clicks are from soundclick.  Wav file is very clean.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/09 19:57:34 (permalink)
    Sweet!

    Too bad you're too busy to record much.  :(  I feel your pain.  

    This is great though! 
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/12 23:04:11 (permalink)
    Hi Janet.  Thanks for commenting.  I actually have a couple of projects in the works right now.  A couple of collabs that will hopefully grace the pages of the songs forum soon.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/12 23:04:56 (permalink)
    Cool!
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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/12 23:14:17 (permalink)
    Indeed!

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/13 19:02:12 (permalink)
    Great to see and hear you around Mark, very tasty tone and style.

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    Re:My new rock instrumental - "So Far Away" 2012/03/14 10:06:28 (permalink)
    Hey Mark, always a pleasure to hear a new one from you
     
    Awesome playing as always, and a killer mix.
     
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