Firesong X
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My song Clockwork Palace
Hi Everyone Thanks to everyone for your feedback on my first song. I am working on your suggestions. I am posting another song. It is a theme for a story that I am working on. The scene is a journey, to a desert location where you see all of time - past, present and future at once and change your fate If you dare. Any feedback or suggestions that you might have would be great. Thanks. John https://soundcloud.com/us...17081/clockwork-palace
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/17 19:02:55
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I really like your clock-sound. Is that from UVI? Are you really in High School?
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/17 19:31:33
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eph221
I really like your clock-sound. Is that from UVI? Are you really in High School?
Thanks. The clock sound isn't from UVI. It is from Eastwest Storm Drum 2. Yes I am in high school. I just finished grade 9. That is our first year of high school., I didn't take music in Grade 9 because I couldn't play an instrument. I tried lots of different ones, but, I sucked. I started making songs on the PS 3 (littlebigplanet 2), and then GarageBand, When I outgrew these, my dad got me a Roland A49 midi keyboard for Christmas and it came with Sonar LE. He set it up for me and said I needed to learn to use it myself. I barely know how to use most of it. The monthly payments for the software (Platinum and Eastwest) really helped. I showed my grade 8 music teacher some of my songs at the end of the year in June and he really thought I should put them on SoundCloud, to share them and to learn. John
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/17 20:14:17
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It's kind of hard to believe John....in 9th grade most of us are still using edible glue and reading books like *believe in make believe* and *the chronicles of narnia*
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Firesong X
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/17 21:25:34
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I will start grade 10 in September. Actually, we took Romeo and Juliet, Of Mice and Men. We did multimedia production in grade 9 with video too. My friends and I mostly read stuff on the Internet and I've never read the books you named. I just like music and wanted to learn and get better at it and that is about it. I guess.
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 05:22:03
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I'm impressed. Very nice tune you have put together and I really enjoyed the melodies. Plenty of talent showing for such a young songster. Keep up the good work I am keen to listen to more of your work.
Regards,
MCi
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 08:40:25
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 12:47:13
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It works here, gives a sense of movement, like a journey. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 21:33:20
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very cool John - nice, patient build up that keeps the listener interested.
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 21:35:43
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Thanks everyone! I am really glad you liked it. I looked for the clock sound for a long time.
John
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/18 21:36:10
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daryl1968
very cool John - nice, patient build up that keeps the listener interested.
Thanks!
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/19 10:33:21
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Glad I listened to this. Your composition shows a lot of intelligence. Sonically, it's very together, nice mix.
Keep 'em coming!
-Tom
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Re: My song Clockwork Palace
2016/07/19 21:11:40
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S emeraldsoul
Glad I listened to this. Your composition shows a lot of intelligence. Sonically, it's very together, nice mix.
Keep 'em coming!
-Tom
Thank you very much! I am really glad you liked it. I will post some more for sure. John
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