NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - WIP VERSION

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2011/12/20 02:27:56 (permalink)

NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - WIP VERSION

 
Marry Christmas everyone , I have been working on this one off and on for two weeks now .
This song is more of a dance song , I'm hoping a good guitar player will take an interest in this song and work with me to finish it .
I need someone who can add the right amount of energy to this song without over doing it .
 
Here is the link : http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=11303036&q=hi&newref=1
 
Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox and I will give you my e-mailing address and send it to you if your really truely interested .
I still plan on adding alittle more to the song from my end and fixing any flaws in the song but for now this is the song as a Collaborate song .
 
Thanks everyone and Merry Christmas !
 
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/20 17:46:14 (permalink)
    Sounds promising so far James and i like those little bits of funky rhythm guitar that comes in every now and again.

    This does need a bit more variation though to call it complete. A couple of change-ups will help to keep the interest of listeners. It sounds like you're planning on doing that anyway.

    The mix and production sound spot on.

    Look forward to the finished version James.


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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/20 18:08:17 (permalink)
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    Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox...
    Dang, I'd love to have a go but sadly I'm not ever remotely "really good"
     
    James, if you'd have been prepared to lower your standards to "can just about hack out a tune", I would have undoubtably been contacting you in your inbox
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/20 19:56:47 (permalink)
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    Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox...
    Dang, I'd love to have a go but sadly I'm not ever remotely "really good"
     
    James, if you'd have been prepared to lower your standards to "can just about hack out a tune", I would have undoubtably been contacting you in your inbox
     
    Morry Chrutsmis
     
    That was the joke , real funny Mr Steve ! Frankly I like what I posted and I did say its a WIP and was asking for alittle help from a good guitar player thats all .
    It is what it is , if you don't like it we'll I guess you don't like it .
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/20 20:06:09 (permalink)
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    Sounds promising so far James and i like those little bits of funky rhythm guitar that comes in every now and again.

    This does need a bit more variation though to call it complete. A couple of change-ups will help to keep the interest of listeners. It sounds like you're planning on doing that anyway.

    The mix and production sound spot on.

    Look forward to the finished version James.
     
    Thanks John thats where a REALLY good guitar player comes into play to add that variation to my song . The ground work is what it is straight forward with a solid beat and thats the way I intented it to be .
    The bridge in this is the variation , I did have plans on adding something more to that section but if you noticed the drum pattern does change slightly in the bridge section  .
     
    Thanks for the comments , my reason for posting was to give people here an ideal where the song is going . As a WIP version a GREAT guitar player should if hes GREAT be able to play off of what I have in place . Theres plenty of room to play and add some great sounding lead guitar .
     
    How about you John  ???? I bet you would sound great in this song !
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 16:02:23 (permalink)

    Merry Christmas to those who have commented on my songs , looks like I found my guitar player . I ask Bobby my friend here on the forum and by e-mail , he wanted to mess around with this new WIP song I just  posted and I said cool I'm sure you will surprise everyone including me here on the forum where everyone is welcome or should be welcome .

    Anyway to those who has treated me with some kindness this year  I wish all of them a very Merry Christmas a Happy New Year !

    Merry Christmas !
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 16:14:45 (permalink)
    Good song so far.  Hope it works out with your guitar player.  The production is good, and the arrangement is interesting enough to cry out for lyrics and vocals.  Joy.

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 16:42:37 (permalink)
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    Good song so far.  Hope it works out with your guitar player.  The production is good, and the arrangement is interesting enough to cry out for lyrics and vocals.  Joy.
     
    Thanks thats just what I told Bobby I had plans for lyrics and vocals , it might be two months before that happens because right after Christmas I have to start packing to move to another place across town , our lease is up at the end of Jan 2012 and its going to be one busy month for me with moving and more doctor appointments .
    So Bobby will have plenty of time to mess around with the song while I try to write out some lyrics for this tune .
     
    I'm sure with some great guitar lead , good lyrics and hopfully some strong vocals its going to sound great !
    Thats the two month plan , thanks for the listen and comments , I hope your Christmas & New Years gives you lots of joy this season .
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 17:17:36 (permalink)
    radio, enjoyed the song. The song moved me inside.
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 17:18:53 (permalink)
    Cheers to you as well.  Looking forward to the finished version.
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    Good song so far.  Hope it works out with your guitar player.  The production is good, and the arrangement is interesting enough to cry out for lyrics and vocals.  Joy.
     
    Thanks thats just what I told Bobby I had plans for lyrics and vocals , it might be two months before that happens because right after Christmas I have to start packing to move to another place across town , our lease is up at the end of Jan 2012 and its going to be one busy month for me with moving and more doctor appointments .
    So Bobby will have plenty of time to mess around with the song while I try to write out some lyrics for this tune .
     
    I'm sure with some great guitar lead , good lyrics and hopfully some strong vocals its going to sound great !
    Thats the two month plan , thanks for the listen and comments , I hope your Christmas & New Years gives you lots of joy this season .
     
    Cheers ! Radio





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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/21 18:23:22 (permalink)
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    radio, enjoyed the song. The song moved me inside.
     
    Thanks Chasmcg , I really think with the right lyrics and vocals and lead guitar this one will end up sounding cool . This is mostly a RAW WIP version  , I had planned on adding some more things to some of the sections in this song and there are a few fixes in the cymbal area and with a few of the drum fills that I want to work on some more .
     
    Happy Holidays to you & your family and friends !
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/22 00:11:03 (permalink)
    Cool work Radio! I look forward to the finished version!

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/22 02:24:20 (permalink)
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    Cool work Radio! I look forward to the finished version!
     
    Thanks Robert , I'm trying to work with Bobby for the first time . Right now its a hit and a miss with Bobby's request , I hope working with him works out .
    If if doesn't then I'll have to put my add up again I guess or do everything myself .
    See what happens in the next two weeks , maybe we can get on the same page .
     
    Have a great Christmas Robert ! Radio
     



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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/22 22:40:26 (permalink)

    Bobby is the man for the job , he just sent me a sample and WOW !
    He surprised me with what he added to my music ,will sounds ten times better with the right mix  .
    I knew what I had posted would work for a any great guitar player and Bobby just proved it to me with his recent sample he sent to me .

    Anyway the song has taken a new twist , can't wait to post the next version with him in it .

    You can beat a man with words then throw the switch but you can't take away his guitar or his skills !

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 12:44:00 (permalink)
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    Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox...
    Dang, I'd love to have a go but sadly I'm not ever remotely "really good"
     
    James, if you'd have been prepared to lower your standards to "can just about hack out a tune", I would have undoubtably been contacting you in your inbox
     
    Morry Chrutsmis
     
     

    Don't be so hard on yersef mate. You've hacked up just about every toon you played on.


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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 12:45:03 (permalink)
    James,

    I'm not sure guitar is what you need. I'd like to hear some really high pitched moog patch doing a melody.
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 14:18:31 (permalink)
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    James,

    I'm not sure guitar is what you need. I'd like to hear some really high pitched moog patch doing a melody.
     
    You might have something there , right now I told Bobby the sample he sent me isn't what I'm looking for so hes working on something else I suggested .
    The other thing this song will not be reposted untill its dang near as perfect as it can be and thats going to happen for another two months .
    I just got word from the new apartment I have be approved to move in , now all my time in the whole month of Jan 2012 will be focus on packing & moving .
     
    If for some reason things don't work out with Bobby would you consider working with me ? Right now I letting Bobby work with it but you just never know what can happen by the end of Jan 2012 .
     
    Happy Holiday & New Year !
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 14:50:55 (permalink)
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    Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox...
    Dang, I'd love to have a go but sadly I'm not ever remotely "really good"

    James, if you'd have been prepared to lower your standards to "can just about hack out a tune", I would have undoubtably been contacting you in your inbox

    Morry Chrutsmis



    Don't be so hard on yersef mate. You've hacked up just about every toon you played on.


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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 15:45:28 (permalink)
    Nice clean track so far. Kind of wide open for interpretation. 

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 18:24:04 (permalink)
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    Nice clean track so far. Kind of wide open for interpretation. 

             Hi Just returned from all the maddness at Walmart and dealing with road with people who can't seem to drive and feel they own the road .
            Thanks ! the goal with all my new song projects from now on is to end up with very clean tracks across the board , hopefully Bobby won't let me down on this one .
     
             Thanks again for the comments  , Happy Holidays to you this season .
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 18:26:34 (permalink)
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    Anyone who is really good can contact me in my inbox...
    Dang, I'd love to have a go but sadly I'm not ever remotely "really good"

    James, if you'd have been prepared to lower your standards to "can just about hack out a tune", I would have undoubtably been contacting you in your inbox

    Morry Chrutsmis



    Don't be so hard on yersef mate. You've hacked up just about every toon you played on.


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    Harsh, but fair
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 18:34:42 (permalink)
     
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/23 19:52:49 (permalink)
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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 16:09:50 (permalink)

      Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone and to those who don't care for me !

    By the way I decided to finished this song by myself , Bobby and I just are not on the same page so I'm calling off working with him on this song project .
    Maybe sometime in Feb I'll start working on it again after I get moved in the new apartment and hooked up again .

    For now have a nice , safe holiday and a Happy New Year ! After tommorrow I'll be pretty busy packing and getting ready for our move sometime mid Jan , Dang I hate moving !!!

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 17:26:17 (permalink)
    A really great start IMO, very funky.

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 17:57:17 (permalink)
    Merry Christmas Radio

    You always have such an excellent mix.  I would add voice instead of a guitar.  Female voice singing alternating with rap.  I think that will go better with a dance song. 

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 18:05:02 (permalink)

    Happy Christmas James.

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 18:36:29 (permalink)
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    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone and to those who don't care for me !

    By the way I decided to finished this song by myself , Bobby and I just are not on the same page so I'm calling off working with him on this song project .
    Maybe sometime in Feb I'll start working on it again after I get moved in the new apartment and hooked up again .

    For now have a nice , safe holiday and a Happy New Year ! After tommorrow I'll be pretty busy packing and getting ready for our move sometime mid Jan , Dang I hate moving !!!

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    You seem a bit peeved at James.
     
     

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 20:22:09 (permalink)
    I think you might be the one of the MULTIPLE USERS KNOWN AS SHAD or Foxwolfen, Also known as Rockin' Robby and many other user names, bandontherun and many others.

     
    Those are different users. At least Fox and Robby anyway.

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    Re:NEW SONG - DANCE BABY DANCE - GUITAR WANTED 2011/12/24 20:52:40 (permalink)
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    A really great start IMO, very funky.
     
    Thanks Vechung you know most likey your right . I have heard music like this where vocals totally change up the song in a postive upbeat way . I still plan on adding in some other tracks to give the song that something extra it needs to support some good lyrics & vocals .
     
    Merry Christmas to you my friend !
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