JulianRay
I think this WIP piece is a nice start, keep it going :)

 
Thanks Julian 
 
I've got to wrack my brain and think where it's off too next 
 

philz
There was nothing I heard that required an apology.  On the contrary, it sounded quite promising.  Keep working on it.  Guitars and synths sound cool together.

Thanks for the encouraging words Phil 
 
The pressure is on now...................

Just to echo previous comments - you have absolutely nothing to apologize for.     Heck, I imagine you'll have more work to do polishing the clean rhythm tone so it really sparkles than you will with your playing.  If you wrote nothing but "here's a new tune featuring guitar" the response probably would have been along the lines of "nice playing". 
 
Now get back to work, will ya?    
 

Wonderful start to a good thing.
Many good suggestions already on this track....I play electric much less than acoustics, so I'm no authority on electric guitar recording for sure but I do agree with the comments to make it a little less dark. I think you do well on the guitar! I like the idea to double track and bring the guitar out more. 
I have a few suggestions that are only suggestions and are my OP only since there are probably many ways to approach a new creation....I might intersperse the guitar with a synth or another guitar tone..they could play off one another. Just a thought. What I mean is, take the guitar out completely in places and add something else in there playing a counter melody or a similar melody. This keeps the listener more intent because periodically something different is playing which adds interest...once again just MYOP. I also think the bass might be just a bit short ..IOW not holing out for a long enough duration. i like what you have done with the drums so far!

Keep working on it sounds like it has good potential to me.

Synkrotron,
  Very cool guitar tune idea, definitely worth developing further but fun as it is too.  I like the synths you used and all sat really well on my speakers.  Nice stuff!