Nanny State

SORRY! Forum won't let me add the link to soundcloud, also will not let me delete this Post.
 Any suggestions?  
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 Ah ha! Today it lets me add the link.  Just one of those days computers or the operator has a glitch.
 Here is the link. 
 https://soundcloud.com/myoldmanscool/nanny-state

Hi James
 
Thanks for your reply.  I've tried editing quite a few times now and unfortunately the Forum is still not letting me download the link to 'SoundCloud'.  I don't know why as I've successfully done this before.
Thanks for your help anyway.
Alan  

In any forum the world over you will always hear a discussion of analogue vs. digital. I don't know where on the fence you sit, or if you've even built a fence, but after a couple of listens to your song I really wanted to hear some analogue sounds or effects. It felt a little too crisp, too clean, too surgical. I'm not sure where any analogue should go, but I did think the choruses worked well, so maybe over the verses. I think maybe your vocals would sit better in the mix (which is first rate by the way) if they weren't quite so clinical.
Nice song.

This is first rate satire regardless of one's point of view.  I enjoyed the clean, clear production, but that's a matter of taste.  The lyrics are thought provoking, to say the least.  Well done.

Welcome to the world of Nanny States, Britain does not stand alone, The US is following suit and so congress and the states attorney generals are suing them for their defamation of character of the people. Your song is very well done, vocals are right on the money and one heck of a mix to boot!! Very nicely done.
 
Peace and Blessings,John
 
PS, By the way, try and get a good nights sleep, it will be the same tomorrow and be worst next year. I learned all this 45 years ago in a socially class. It's about population growth and the government needs control so they can pay people to stay home and we all get to pay for it. Enjoy!!

Sounds great. Enjoyed the listen.

Hi
John - theguitarplayer, thanks for your kind words, your correct in saying that the Nanny State is not just a UK problem. I was in Canada & the USA this last summer and saw plenty of examples of it there.  Don't worry, I sleep like a log!
 
Brother Walt @ Waltenstein Studios, thanks your comment made me smile!! Loved your 'Cerulean Sojourn (feat. Clint Martin) by the way.
 
chasmcg, Thanks for listening.
 
Herb the Guitarhacker, thanks for listening and sure enough the village has change a lot in my time too. 
 
Have a good weekend guys.
Alan
 
 
 
 
 

I dig everything about this!
 
Yeah, it's techno, which isn't me, some of those songs assault my ears from start to end.  But this has a perfect blend of interesting musical parts and phrases.  It's so well done I just enjoyed the song.  Only now am I thinking on the techno aspect.
 
Your message came through loud and clear.  Excellent song.

olemon
I dig everything about this!
 
Yeah, it's techno, which isn't me, some of those songs assault my ears from start to end.  But this has a perfect blend of interesting musical parts and phrases.  It's so well done I just enjoyed the song.  Only now am I thinking on the techno aspect.
 
Your message came through loud and clear.  Excellent song.

Thanks 'olemon'  I don't know what genre one would put the song in, I just start with an idea and see what I end up with.
Alan