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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/15 23:59:41 (permalink)
I enjoyed this!  Very good lead vocal/playing/mixing.  I might change the bass line on the chorus "come your way" chord, but no big deal.  Good basic pop songcraft writing, with a pre-chorus/chorus.
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/16 01:03:32 (permalink)
This is one of the best tunes I've heard from you guys. I LOVE Daryl's voice! But something sounds a little AM radio-ish or something. Sort of the same thing I mentioned in the other song he did on his own. It's like missing body or something.
 
The rest is awesome in this. The song itself, hook, all that stuff is awesome. Bass could probably come up a little Ed, (as Jimmy pointed out) and as mgh mentioned, I might drop the snare down a hair. It sounds a little loud to me in spots...to the point of sometimes sticking out a bit more than it should. All subjective.
 
However, you're starting to get "that sound" to where, even when something is too loud, you're not burying anything. This is huge from an engineer perspective. Everything remaining audible at all times is the most important and you nailed that here. Well done guys....great performances from everyone. :)
 
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/16 16:07:59 (permalink)
This is very good work! The instruments sits perfectly in the mix! Tha vocals are also very nicely done!
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/16 16:25:14 (permalink)
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Great work guys, sounds really good.  Very catchy tune.
 
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/18 12:49:16 (permalink)
Midiboy
Pretty cool song.  Very catchy.  Not to be picky, but on the last chorus, I think you cut off the first part of the word "and" on the last line. Kind of caught me off guard.  Other than that...great song!  Great mix. 


Thanks Midiboy - thanks for the heads up too
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/18 14:44:55 (permalink)
This song has been on the sonar top 20 for a record number of days.
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/19 15:58:44 (permalink)
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This song has been on the sonar top 20 for a record number of days.


I'm going to go on a limb here and say, that must be a good thing. 
I like it too!! 

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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/20 07:28:26 (permalink)
Serious_Noize!
Great tune and performance, but the vocals are too out there, way too loud in my opinion. 
 
Eitherway, kudos to all of you, great song! Enjoyed the listen. 
 


Thanks for the listen and suggestions
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/22 18:58:40 (permalink)
jmasno5
It sounded great. Nice mix. I listened to it on a JBL Clip2 and it sounded pro to me. Nice work everyone!


Thanks so much - we really appreciate it.
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/23 11:36:53 (permalink)
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/23 11:37:24 (permalink)
mikeinFL
I enjoyed this!  Very good lead vocal/playing/mixing.  I might change the bass line on the chorus "come your way" chord, but no big deal.  Good basic pop songcraft writing, with a pre-chorus/chorus.




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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/23 11:38:30 (permalink)
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This is one of the best tunes I've heard from you guys. I LOVE Daryl's voice! But something sounds a little AM radio-ish or something. Sort of the same thing I mentioned in the other song he did on his own. It's like missing body or something.
 
The rest is awesome in this. The song itself, hook, all that stuff is awesome. Bass could probably come up a little Ed, (as Jimmy pointed out) and as mgh mentioned, I might drop the snare down a hair. It sounds a little loud to me in spots...to the point of sometimes sticking out a bit more than it should. All subjective.
 
However, you're starting to get "that sound" to where, even when something is too loud, you're not burying anything. This is huge from an engineer perspective. Everything remaining audible at all times is the most important and you nailed that here. Well done guys....great performances from everyone. :)
 
-Danny




Thanks so much Danny - I agree, Bapu did a brilliant job on this one
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/23 18:22:15 (permalink)
I hate it!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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You guys should start your own forum.  I don't think I've ever heard a bad one from you cats.  Are you aliens?
 
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/23 18:25:00 (permalink)
Aliens?
 
Well, Daryl is British, does that count?
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/25 10:36:48 (permalink)
Frugaard
This is very good work! The instruments sits perfectly in the mix! Tha vocals are also very nicely done!


Thank you kind sir
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/08/25 12:01:13 (permalink)
Very catchy and cool....good mix....good playing..thx for share.
Vocals do fit nicely on point.
;o)

 
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/09/11 18:05:53 (permalink)
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Very catchy and cool....good mix....good playing..thx for share.
Vocals do fit nicely on point.
;o)


Thanks BJ.
 
Can I say BJ in this forum?
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Re: New Forum Monkeys original song - Love Will Come Your Way 2016/09/11 18:25:03 (permalink)
sure....nothin' personal...all good  lol
 

 
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