New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy

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Wirenut
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2012/06/27 14:34:15 (permalink)

New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy

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post edited by Wirenut - 2012/06/27 14:36:20
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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/27 14:53:42 (permalink)
    Great song, well performed. Enjoyed that. You need to tame the mid-highs and warm them up. I am not sure if I am hearing the room on the vox, the mic tone or some effects, but the vocal mix is very brittle, bordering on harsh.

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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/27 20:54:17 (permalink)
    This is a nice pop song that's well performed by your daughter.  I didn't hear the harshness on the vocal that Shad heard, but he has great ears and good judgement.  If she keeps this up, she may have a future.

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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/27 21:00:19 (permalink)
    Very nice! Love the harmonies. A little mixing and you'll have a winner! I would leave out the chord at the end, making it a cliff hanger ending.
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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/28 23:52:41 (permalink)
    Thanks for all the nice comments. I'll pass them along to her.
     
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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/29 00:07:38 (permalink)
    Hey Doug, yea I am with lynn on this I can't hear what Shad is hearing but Shad knows what he's talking about, maybe tame the mids on the electric guitar slighty, perhaps thats what he is hearing.

    What I would like is a little more bass, the low-mids for me are a little on the muddy side.

    Not my sort of music but I think there would be lots of people who could dig this tune.

    Good work though Doug or should I say your daughter.

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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/06/29 07:35:27 (permalink)
    she has a lovely voice, sweet melody

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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/07/07 00:00:00 (permalink)
    Thanks again for the nice comments.
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    Re:New Pop song by my Daughter......Enjoy 2012/07/07 09:15:35 (permalink)
    Very nice indeed, I enjoyed that.

     
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