New Rock Song New Mix 6/18

Bring the vocals up about 1 db. It sounds like I'm listening to a warped tape (sounds like volume swells). I like the song. But it seems if something is off with the eqing. Can't pinpoint it, but it seems like something is missing... maybe someone else will pinpoint it. Ok. the song stops kind of sudden, but the SoundClick timer goes on and on. I think the song should've been just a bit longer. Liked the song. There's a muddy feel to the recording though, like it could be made clearer. Did I mention, I like the song?

OK, you win the Foxwolfen song of the month award.



THAT WAS OUT_FREAKING_STANDING!!!!!

I agree, bring the vox up a hair.

It sounds to me like you have too much compression, there appears to be some pumping going on.

Great, great song! Way too short. I would be quite content if it never ended heheh

Wonderful!

(EDIT - Just want to play this one over and over - fix the minor mix issues and then tell me where to buy the CD!).

Thanks very much for the nice compliment. I will post a better mix soon.

Glad you liked it.

Thank you again,

Lawrence,

I really like what you've done here, and I REALLY like the vocals, but agree, that they seem to be pushed out by the rest of the mix in parts. In other parts, they're right there, but in some places, they seem to be behind the music, and they really need to be out there (they're good)

Hi Robbby:

Thanks. I never really considered myself a lead Vocalist, but the more I do it I'm gettin better at it. I will tweak levels and re-post.

Thanks again & take care,

Lawrence,

Whatever version is up right now is just phenomenal!! I wouldn't change a thing... Hell if I could do what you just did, I'd be too busy trying to get a record deal to even post for comments! Its REALLY is that good. Nice one man

I just looked back and realized YOU were the one that did that AMAZING cover of "Elenor Rigby"... Whoa dude, what are eating for breakfast!? I gotta get me a bowl of that!

Hi;

Hey that was extremely nice of you to say. gee I hope your right.

Thanks again for the kind words,

Lawrence Ellington,

Hey Lawrence, Great song. Didn't listen to the pretweaked version but this one is fantastic. Good song writing in this genre.

Rhyno

Very, very nice!!!

This is awesome!!!! Don't be afraid to be heard! You have a great voice so TURN IT UP a little more!!!!!!!

Keep on keepin' on!

Extremely nice of you to say. I'm going to work on fine tuning it taday and post an updated mix. thank you for the king encouragement.

Lawrence,

That sounded great. Lush sounds and crystal clear guitar work. vocals were right there and performed with soul.
I really enjoyed it.

Very good tune. I like it.

The vocal level thing is very dependent on the lower mids response of the speaker and room. On my little computer speakers, which have hyped lower mids, they vocals are actually pretty up front. Sometimes it seems impossible to really get a vocal EQ mix that sounds consistent everywhere. Maybe high pass it up a little higher perhaps, I dunno. That might make it too shrill, though you could roll off some high sto compensate maybe.

Hooly crap!! this is freaking sweet! It sounds as though the vocals are bit too processed though. But the song writing is phenomenal!! I LOOVE IT! I'm really glad you mention for me to check it out. It doesn't sound as punchy as I want it to be (but I think that it is because it is so good I just really want it to rock as hard as a nickelback song) There also appears to be artifacts from the mp3 encoding? Sounds like a lot of psychoacoustic compression/masking is going on. Dunno. Something is giving that phasey sound that I remember from low-bit rate songs though.

I'm you're newest fan, man. I would totally buy a record from you if it were produced in a really good studio and all that. I can just imagine how awesome it would sound... ah yeah. That'd be sweet. I have friends that would like this stuff too. I'll give them a linky to it. I'm having to play it a second time now. I seriously hope you get a record deal. Heck of a lot better than the majority of the whiney boy band crap out there with no soul.

Oh my gosh. I just saw that you said you did everything on this one!!!? That's even more amazing. That's crazy. For this to be a one man production I would have never ever guessed in my whole life... But yeah guy - you have an astoundingly good voice.

Oh no! How do I download it?? I want to download this song darnit! lol. Is it on itunes or something?

very good job overall...enjoyed it...very FM friendly I'd say!! I'll leave the mixing/eqing alone as its all been said so far....I just say good work!!