markus
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New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
here it is, the new song- GOTTA DRAW THE LINE artist: Markus writers: A. Bolton & M. Spence publishers: (c) 2007 Copyright Control & Stat Songs Publishing, Ltd. (ASCAP) from the CD, DIGITAL ELCIPSE. thanks. markus
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The Big D
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/07 12:12:03
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Very nice.
I think the guitar distortion is a little unnatural sounding... a little too fuzzy... and it needs a little more bottom end. Also a weird chirping sound near the end that goes from the left channel to the right.
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 02:13:04
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listened in cans
my 2 cents
good panning use of space
guitar maybe cut the highs abit
up the drums
don't hear the kick---- get more bottom drive pumped up
lead vox could use some grit--rasp--energy
your vox on key good harmonys
chorus---- vox buried a bit
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 11:18:29
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Good tune marcus. I'd back off a little on the git distorion (or lower the volume on the power chords)
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 12:08:18
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This is a really cool tune, Marcus. I like the distorted boxxy guitar. It is a bit too loud IMO though. I think lead vocal could be up a tad.
Fresh sounding music for sure.
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 18:07:34
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Coool groove to this, but I agree the git was a tad harsh.
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 18:22:36
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Yeah, I like the song, the mix seems a little top heavy through my phones.
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/08 19:03:08
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Markus, neat groove. I like! I'll echo others on the guitar. It's too 'fizzy' and sounds a bit too thin and 'harsh'. There's also a lot of 'chirping' going on, especially around 1:30. It almost sounds like fret squeek or maybe it is an artifact from the encoding... Not sure.
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/11 20:05:28
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Markus, very bright mix. Kill the cricket and maybe add some low-mids.
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markus
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RE: New Song: Gotta Draw the Line
2008/09/13 04:18:07
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