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2014/11/07 11:01:39 (permalink)

New Song: Hello From The Road

Here's a new song my band has recorded called Hello From The Road. I would love any feedback on the mix, thank you so much for listening! 
 
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    Re: New Song: Hello From The Road 2014/11/07 11:18:14 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby Travis406 2014/11/07 11:39:22
    The vocal come across well and the guitars sound nice and clear however the Bass is booming and completely obliterating the kick.  Back off on the bass add a bit of surgical EQ to it to let the kick add the bottom end weight and thud.
     
    Good start which is always a good place a few tweaks here and there and you probably have a winner.

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    Re: New Song: Hello From The Road 2014/11/07 11:21:25 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby Travis406 2014/11/07 11:39:20
    First, I really like the song.  It me it has sort of a "grunge meets George Harrison" vibe I find very appealing.  As for the mix others guys on this forum will give you more in depth thoughts than I am able to, but it seems to me that the acoustic guitar is really competing with the electric lead (an example would be at :19 when the lead comes in). Maybe turn it down a tad?   Also, the lead vocal is very well sung, but I find it a bit too out front, so maybe turn it down a bit.  These are both just niggles and only my very subjective opinion. 
     
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    Re: New Song: Hello From The Road 2014/11/07 11:48:15 (permalink)
    Thank you so much! I will definitely change the bass, vocals and acoustic!

     

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    Re: New Song: Hello From The Road 2014/11/07 13:33:49 (permalink)
    A very pro effort. Clean mix and top notch delivery. Great job guys.

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    Re: New Song: Hello From The Road 2014/11/07 14:27:48 (permalink)
    Thank you Tim!!

     

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