New Song (ear worm)

I wish this ear worm would die.
(not the song, the ear worm )

Country sitar, huh...   now that's something I've never thought I'd hear...  
 
Interesting combination.   Any plans for vocals or melodic instrument?  

Ya the sitar is  not perfection.  Here's the lyrics:
 
Enter battlefields forever
say you're gonna stay
disregard the people
but then people pass away
 
There's problems still
issues of the heart
where people dwell
only time will tell.
 
 
Let it come to pass
don't throw it all away
forgive yourself your sins
you know god already has.
 
Don't throw it all away
you know that we'll pull through
we have so much to live for
you know that we'll pull through
 
 
 
chorus 1
rise
in the morning
thankful for the rest
thank god for new beginnings
don't dwell on the past.
 
 
Verse 2:
 
 Your voice
 the anthem of my life
 eternal silence
 forever is too long
 
It's music to me
though you didn't know
I won't enjoy another song
forever is too long
(modulate)
forever is too long
 
 
 Chorus 2:
 
 
forever is too long
forever is too long
 
Verse*
Enter battlefields forever
say you're gonna stay
disregard the people
but then people pass away
 
 
 
Bridge:
 
 
 
 
 
Rise
In the morning
wait for a better day
pray
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

and if he beats her, she'll leave him for Eric Clapton.
 
You could put the sound of a waterfall in the background, so I could get the Rush 2112 effect. That would be cool . . .
 
I'd say your song and performance are quite pleasant! I went with the sitar and ended up liking it.Overall, a nice mellow vibe is achieved.
 
I waited in vain for anything being sung, but apparently there are lyrics, so sounds like eventually the baby is making plans to sing?
 
 
cheers,
-Tom