New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House)

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2014/06/10 04:11:32 (permalink)

New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House)

Hello
 
Working on a new track, feedback much appriciated:)
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Re: New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House) 2014/06/10 13:12:10 (permalink)
Never quite understood how to chill out with that insentient thump, but then I guess it is part of the genre.
Production wise it sounds OK here, I might of caught a touch of bass resonance in the opening and there is considerable hiss and the tick of a metronome? at the end.
 
Would probably work well in the right environment, thanks for sharing. 

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Re: New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House) 2014/06/10 14:13:16 (permalink)
It sounds fairly well balanced on my cheapo PC headphones.   Well, except for the hissy metronome at the end as Wookie pointed out.   
 
Is there a vocal or other melodic instrument to go over top?
 

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Re: New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House) 2014/06/10 17:19:19 (permalink)
Thanks guys!
I didn't check the end when bouncing... It was ok before...
I beleuve that it is the sidechain trigger that makes the noise... annoying..
 
Regarding vocals, Im not the best singer on the planet and don't know any singer;)
Thinking on adding some vocals from a sample cd.

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Re: New Song in Progress - Feedback please (Chill-Out/House) 2014/06/10 17:26:23 (permalink)
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Regarding vocals, Im not the best singer on the planet and don't know any singer;)
Thinking on adding some vocals from a sample cd.




It's been quite a few years, but, been there done that.  
 

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